Wasn't a fan of the strange note deviations you chose to make at first, but it grew on me after a few listens. Overall sounds great, wish it was longer.
All the hallmarks that make this song so cool are missing, like the epic guitar chords in the intro and throughout the song….plus you’re playing a B major instead of B minor…frustrating to hear. Decent singing voice, just no energy. Misses the mark for me. Sorry.