All the comments below are well deserved. Rahel, you have done a really nice demo and are warm and enthusiastic. Wishing you a great future whatever you do. We need more people like yo u this world! :-)
You did a really great job at keeping this simple topic interesting! You were very confident and it really showed throughout your speech. It was really easy to follow, so great job!!
You seemed very comfortable and confident throughout the speech! Your process was well explained and I like that you gave at-home substitutes for any equipment you used. If I had any constructive criticism, I would just say to show a different angle when folding. maybe a birds eye view or showing the front of you while folding would have worked! But overall, I think this was a very good speech!
Great job Rachel! You definitely demonstrate credibility by guiding us and doing the folding yourself. I think that having someone else record for you as well was perfect as it provided and entire picture, thank for sharing! - Viri Robles
The video was very organized and the different folds transitioned well into another. Your voice was very clear and a good volume! You didn't use any filler words and the sentences flowed. The only thing that could have been better is if you could see both your face and how the clothing was being folded at the same time.
Rachel, Your topic was simple yet unique and easy to understand. I like how you used your background of working in the spirit shop because it made you seem credible. You did a good job of not stuttering or retracting things you said, it seemed very polished. Good volume and demonstrations as well.
This video was very well blocked, none of the movement seemed unintentional or unnecessary. Great used of the space you had available. Your credibility was backed up by your ability to showcase the folding techniques you were explaining. You projected very well when talking through the folds, so nothing was lost while you had to pay attention to the clothes.
I thought you did a really great job with the camera work and editing! You were very clear and I enjoyed the 3 ways on how to fold t-shirts! The only comment I have regarding something you could have improved is making sure not to cover your mouth when you held up the folding boards. Really great job!!