I do find it funny how Carla is always depicted as being younger than Walter when she's got at least 10-20 years on him. Walter is around 60-ish in game. Carla is quite old to be piloting. Granted, whatever slow ageing tech they got, Carla probably used it unlike Walter. We know they are able to keep humans in stasis because of 621 and the like
While I can see what you mean in the PS, I personally believe this is still a very good job, specially the concepts of each scene: Rusty dodging missiles like crazy while shooting and slicing through them, moving from left to right to outmaneuver the drones, the freaking window shot of his AC's head before blasting the ship... It's all so ridiculously cool and fitting for such a legendary pilot. This is some good stuff.
I really like this! Keep it up! Edit: I have now watched all of your storyboards, and I really enjoy your work. I can't imagine a colored version, it'd be SO COOL!
we have very definitions of "cant draw mechs" when I say it theyre the old old school transformers in all the bad ways when you say it its actually well done n cool mechs