very beautiful calligraphy ! but , it needs work in Noons Yaas and Ray and Waows some small some low some too high some with Yays are out of touch of style and extra spaces Meem Yaa combinations some too short than others some unrecognizable . but its looks beautiful
if you could mange read through whole poem without breaking it you add your expression but not the poem who it commands one to absorb it to her or himself when you break as you do you take the meanings that is hidden in poem the character that creates expression is dead how you dictate it in your terms none of the linings and Mesras are as you expressed has that expression like the poem has to it self, to connect you the thoughts or expression of experience of life moment the poem expressed upon its the building upon the fraction of moment , and mind get to bank on the since of feelings ,and how it amused by it self you did good at very high note but poem is dead .
