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Trust me everytime jk said “my love” and 7:20 this time when it said that “ his love for her (y/n) was eternal” I laughed so hard but ironically..lol..if he would loved her that much how could he let her die for his ex even tho he thought she was pregnant that doesn’t mean y/n couldn’t be his first choice to be saved by him and she saved him when he was about to commit suicide and that’s how he repay back!!! And now the audacity he has to say he loved her☠️if love is like that then it’s good to be single

A well deserved ending. He is facing the consequences for choosing the wrong path. I’m just glad he isn’t fighting to get back y/n bc he knew he lost her forever and that she is happy with Yoongi. Yuna also changed for the better. I liked the character development. But there were some missing stuff like how she was saved and all but overall this was good

For the first time I really loved the vamp's character development....loved it ❤️❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

This is a good ending but I'm still not satisfied. Jungkook went away just like that??? He didn’t regret enf like he deserved..... nothing just a bye and gone.... I wanted him see y/n in yoongi's arms...watching them living a happy life.....wanted to see him in more pain. But guess what it ended right away. Otherwise the ff is good

This was the bestest. Best ff I have ever seen . Im I'm lucky to see it . Great job author . Hope you flourish well ✨ 🙏 ☺ 😊

both yuna and junkook deserve this

yesss loved it!! im glad yn didn't end up with jungkook

Doctors can't do that in real life. As I know you can donate both the kidneys if only you're brain dead or your life can't be saved. And I truly choose death rather than accepting such a person's kidneys. If he truly loved you he wouldn't have left you, even for a pregnant ex and expect others to save you. Actually it's impossible. If I really was y/n, I'll definitely beg universe to take my life, from the moment he left me as if I was never a choice. Anyway I enjoyed this ff, and thanks for your hard work.

i cried when she died yuna is a legend in this story yuna rests god forgives her and shes watching over us

Sorry neither JK or Yuna deserved a second chance. He did not suffer enough and neither did she. Yes, she may have donated both of her kidneys, but so what? Whatever Yuna did in the end was by her own choosing as a way to right her wrongdoing, which made things seem somewhat anticlimactic. And of course, y/n has to be so forgiving in the end. Really y/n??? (His ex lied about her pregnancy, destroyed your marriage and tried to kill you.) But then again, if Jk was so willing to leave you in a burning car and dash off with his ex, then maybe Yuna did you a favor by showing you his true colors. Nevertheless, this was a good twoshot.

I am speecless ! A dark story , that's what this one is ! A well written but painful story

I really love the ending .....👀❤️

All I know he didnt even love her Btw why jk belaiming only Yuna for me he's the only one at fault

This is amazing 😭

no lmao trying to kill someone/actually killing somone is so dmn wrong saying 'they deserve a second chance' is like giving them another time/chance to kill you again I dont feel bad for Yuna she deserves it she literally almost killed someone.

Author can you please make one bonus part??

😌yoongi and yn

Last song title please

You had good idea for story but you're way / style of writing is bad..everything is so rushed, without any order, you move from one event to another too fast without any background story and many times nothing is in harmony, and it doesn't make sense. Also some parts of the story don't fit with the events before that... for example: how Yoongi saved Y/n after he left Jungkook in the hospital if the car with Y/n exploded while Jungkook was still there and witnessed it? If she was alive, someone who was there would have already saved her there, and they wouldn't have waited for Yoongi to show up. Or in one moment you write that Jungkook's company went bankrupt and then you write that he is one of the top 10 best CEOs in Korea. There should be at least couple of sentences that explain how he went from bankruptcy to the position of being in the top 10. As for the part of story that Y/n is the best CEO, you just suddenly move on to that story without any introduction. The story is full of omissions and you still have a lot of work to do to improve and be good at writing. One more thing, characters in ff are also so confusing.. especially Jungkook's. He doesn't know what he wants or who he loves. Of course, I will support you because you have potential and I am telling you all this just so that you know where you are making mistakes so that you can correct them over time and be better. My goal is not to make you sad or make you stop writing. I hope you will understand that my comment is well-intentioned criticism and advice, not hate.

Ululululu drama

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Where's part 1?

So what jk said while being drunk was true.. That he still had feelings for yuna? Did he love yn? I really wanna know..

Was part one deleted? Never got to see it.

was it love or just guilt? why he choose his ex again over the one he claimed he loves?

Is this the second part

Where is ist part plz give me the link

Hello armies, can anyone tell me where's the first part of this video 🥺🥺

I loved it but I feel bad for jungkook a little bit but it's fine.