Great video! But need to improve on which actor line goes first. For example: Actor 1: "Sorry boys were closed" Actor 2: "GIVE US A DRINK" Sounds wrong right? The correct one is: Actor 2: "GIVE US A DRINK" Actor 1: "Sorry boys were closed" And also maybe try to say it different so that the bartender's excuses of not serving these outlaws can be valid.
Ik I wrote the script and told them to say it after but like I didn’t wanna redo it plus it still makes sense cause they walk in the bar so the bartender tells them they’re closed
