This makes me wanna get my fat butt up and do. I've been in shape in my youth but being a father and having a family has made me weak.... 😭 I need motivation to get back!!!
Very clean i love how you use fast to slow on kills and your match cuts are great only problem i had was the sfx try adding a sniper shot and handcannon sfx to the corresponding kills
You should add more SFX tho maybe in your case voice lines and whooshes also with narrative editing a good trick is to not tell one big story but to cut your edit up into 3 mini stories or characters in the edit then splice it into your whole edit instead of going from start to finish wondering what scene do I add next