Estimada Amiga no se como decirle que su voz melodiosa y romántica me hace sentir muy feliz gracias que siempre cante como lo hace que todo sus presentaciones sean aclamadas Amigo Perú
Amiga mis felicitaciones tiene una voz extraordinario bien melodiosa que la musica que canta me recuerda mucho de mi juventud. Gracias me siento muy contento que todo le vaya bien hasta pronto su amigo de Perú ....
The white birches, the blue sky and the south wind. 《English Translation》 Field cherry blossoms are blooming on the hills in the spring of the northern country. Seasons in the city (東京) are difficult to distinguish. I’ve just received a small packet from my mother. Isn’t it about time I should return to my hometown (長野縣)? The melting snow, and the water flowing under the log bridge. The sprouts of the larches (落葉松) are growing in the spring of the northern country. Though we like each other, both still dare not say, “I love you.” I’ve left for five years. How are you my girl? Isn’t it about time I should return to my hometown? The Kerria joponica roses(隸棠花), the dawn mist and a little hut with a waterwheel. Kids songs can be heard in the spring of the northern country (長野縣). Though my elder brother is often silent like my father who seldom talks, will they both drink wine together once in a while? Isn’t it about time I should return to my hometown? This is my English translation. I hope you will like it. ありがとうございます。
The white birches, the blue sky, and the south wind. Field cherry blossoms were blooming on the hills in the spring of my hometown. Seasons in Tokyo were difficult to my hometown. I’ve be received a small packet from my mother. Isn’t it about time I should return to my hometown? Snow was melting, and the water was flowing under the log bridge. The sprouts of the larches were growing in the spring of my hometown. We liked each other, but we still dared not to say, “I love you.” I’ve been away for five years. How are you, my girl? Isn’t it about time I should return to my hometown? The Kerria japonica roses, the dawn mist, and a little hut with a waterwheel. Kids' songs could be heard in the spring of my hometown. Though my elder brother was often silent like my father who seldom talked, will they both drink wine together once in a while? Isn’t it about time I should return to my hometown?
chou mm さん、 你很有研究精神，以下是我的建議。願你更進步。 1. 現在的時式 (簡單式、進行式、完成式) 與 未來式 較好。 2. "were difficult to my hometown" 3. "I’ve be received " 4. "Kids' songs" 一般都用 "Kids songs" 就可以。 5. Though my elder brother was often silent like my father who seldom talked, will they both drink... 《時式不一致》
