A lot of hilarious moments during this event. Thanks for translating! The three refined ladies (Tasomaru and her evil stepsisters) dominated the tournament, but Suu-chan stole the crown from Beni's head w
was really hoping my girl shinomiya would win, as flat is justice afterall, but ema is just too strong with her massive melons, rip my sweet sweet cute and funny child
Maybe it's just me, but I find the green subtitles too light to contrast against a white outline, with this font at least. It's a bit difficult to read.
I notice that you often mix up pronouns. Instead of using "she," you use "he." This is a common mistake that Google Translate usually make when translating Japanese to English. Just remember that female characters should be referred to as "she" and "her," while males should use "he" and "his."