國外聲樂老師點評 李健《父親寫的散文詩》Vocal Coach Reaction to Li Jian - A Father's Poem Live Stage #lijian #李健 

《父亲写的散文诗》-李健 《A poem written by Dad》- Lee Jian ''一九八四年 庄稼还没收割完 ''1984, the crops are not done harvest yet. 儿子躺在我怀里 睡得那么甜 My son is sleeping soundly on my chest. 今晚的露天电影 没时间去看 No time to catch a movie at the open cinema tonight. 妻子提醒我 修修缝纫机的踏板 My wife reminds me of fixing the sewing machine stand. 明天我要去 邻居家再借点钱 I am going to borrow some money from the neighbor again tomorrow. 孩子哭了一整天哪 闹着要吃饼干 To think that my child has cried profusely wanting a piece of cookie. 蓝色的涤卡上衣 痛往心里钻 Wearing my usual blue khaki jacket, and feeling an intense pain drilling into my heart. 蹲在池塘边上 狠狠给了自己两拳'' As I squatting down near to a pond, and give myself a couple of heavy punches.'' 这是我父亲 日记里的文字 This were the words written on my Dad's diary. 这是他的青春 留下留下来的散文诗 This is the poem that he left in the expense of his youth life. 多年以后 我看着泪流不止 Its been a few decades, and I am still tearful after reading it every time. 可我的父亲已经 老得像一个影子 But my dad has aged, unnoticeable by people just like a shadow ''一九九四年 庄稼早已收割完 ''1994, the crops has been harvested much earlier. 我的老母亲去年 离开了人间 My beloved mother has passed away last year. 儿子穿着白衬衫 跑进了校园 My son put on his uniform and went for a school. 可是他最近 有点心事瘦了一大圈 But he is having some hard time lately, and slimmed down significantly. 想一想未来 我老成了一堆旧纸钱 When I think about the future, after I pass away. 那时的儿子 已是真正的男子汉 My son probably has mature and grown become a real man by that time. 有个可爱的姑娘 和他成了家 He will marry the young sweet lady who he love dearly and form a family. 但愿他们 不要活的 那么艰难'' I wish that they would not go through poverty and suffer just like me.'' 这是我父亲 日记里的文字 This were the words written on my Dad's diary. 这是他的生命 留下 留下来的散文诗 This is the poem that he has left for me with the last breath of his life. 多年以后 我看着泪流不止 Its been a few decades, and I am still tearful after reading it every time. 可我的父亲已经 老得像一个影子 But my dad has aged, unnoticeable by people just like a shadow Ending 这是我父亲 日记里的文字 This were the words written on my Dad's diary. 这是他的生命 留下 留下来的散文诗 This is the poem that he has left for me with the last breath of his life. 多年以后 我看着泪流不止 Its been a few decades, and I am still tearful after reading it every time. 可我的父亲在风中像一张旧报纸 But my father has long gone just like an old newspaper carried away by the wind. 这是那一辈人留下的足迹， This are the footprints left by the person of previous generation. 几场风雨后就要抹去了痕迹。 The mark will vanish after laden by numerous rain and storms. 这片土地曾让我泪流不止， This piece of soil has set me into tears in the past. 埋葬了多少人心酸的往事 as It has buried countless people's sorrowful past. Translated by JustinJie, damn the Ninja is cutting the onion :')

"这是我父亲 日记里的文字，这是他的青春 留下留下来的散文诗......"每次聽到這兩句我都忍不住落淚，想起我的父親，想起遠去的歲月。

不敢相信 就算是reaction 斷斷續續的 我也被李健的歌聲感動落淚

他是我的理想型，帅，高学历，温柔，专情， 有才华， 幽默

听完老师的讲解我才更加清晰地认识到我为什么喜欢李健，我就是偏爱这种纯粹的歌声，非常排斥那种花里胡哨的转音，很多时候我听一首歌会觉得旋律非常美妙而人声很多余，但李健的歌声无疑是对歌曲的完美诠释。

我的最爱，李健❤补充一句，李健也是个很棒的吉他手！

李健演唱的魔力，听完了，我们像是停格着，还在沉醉当中，还在回味，好像品尝了一道美食，还残留着味道，想念着。

我很喜歡這首歌的詞曲，也很喜歡李健詮釋的這版本，真的是每聽必流淚 李健唱的"當你老了","十點半的地鐵"，也是娓娓道來的細膩風格，同樣大推~

每次聽完都淚流滿面

选择轻轻唱 和因为没有选择，轻轻唱 有很大的差别 李健是前者。 技术强大的很。

老師說李健有一種故事感❤我喜歡這故事的娓娓道來

這首歌 每次聽也會想哭😢

很喜歡音樂詩人李健

反覆地聽，每聽一次哭一次，想起了自己的老父親，歌詞是很有意境的

第一次看老师穿这么多衣服

除了毛不易的一荤一素 这个是近几年让我哭的最惨的一首歌 跟一荤一素一样 歌词真挚质朴不是胡乱煽情

李健 是唯一能用這種風格打敗 競技性的歌手。

對我來說不懂這首歌歌詞意義的人是無法來評價這首歌的，當然這首歌不管是旋律還是人聲都是非常棒的，但它最大的特色跟重點就是在於歌詞，無法理解歌詞然後來評價這首歌我覺得對於它來說是非常不公平的。 我本人對於這種較平淡的旋律是沒那麼熱愛的，但每次看完這首歌的歌詞總是讓我淚流滿面，對於我們來說，真的有太多的意義，旋律還是人聲什麼的都是其次，歌詞才是賦予這首歌靈魂的地方

每次都要鼓足勇气才能听这首歌 因为我知道听完后我肯定泪流不止

Can I ask who is the translator? Accurate, beautiful and tasteful! Plus great chemistry with the reviewer in this video ❤

李健能够唱到人心里

李健- 《假如爱有天意》 强力推荐。每次听都会哭的

Beautiful.. story telling tone... Godd example of not needing big vocal/ crazy pitch to deliver a good lovely performance.

小視窗的消音選擇莫明其妙,全曲最後的高潮部份,即李健將歌曲昇華至一整個父輩那段新寫歌詞* 來個消音🙃 李健的聲線頓時變得怪怪的,最後小號吹奏的樂章更是完全聽不到了😡 *那是一輩子留下的足跡,幾場風雨後就要抹去的痕跡,這片土地曾讓我淚流不止,埋藏了多少心酸的往事

老師後面表演也超讚😊

希望老師早日成為李健的聽友，多講點～ 李健很多非常棒的 live 😁

剖析的绝了，专业

The buildup to the Chorus leads to a nice reward. Everytime I hear this song I get a little anxious to get to it.

《父亲写的散文诗》是由董玉方作词，许飞作曲。向他们致敬。

You got it. He is comparable to Taylor Swift in style, except for that he doesn’t dance and he doesn’t limit his genre to love songs. This song is dedicated to his father who strives all his life to provide for his family through hard years. It sure is an emotional song.

Wow. This is almost the only youtube that i totally using 1x speed to watch... Usually im using 2x speed to watch.

既然講到story-telling tone, 希望老師有機會能聽聽齊秦早期中期的演出，這位被老師稱讚為 “I like his tone”, “once in a while, someone would sound totally like its/himself”, “his tone is unique”，作品兼顧搖滾與抒情，音色唱腔與才情都獨一無二難以複製的歌手。

這首之前第一次聽就流眼淚

I ❤ listening to your comments about Zhou Shen's music so much!!❤

确实是在telling a story 音乐真的能突破语言边界

the lyrics is very wonderful, it makes people cry

Wow! 100k subscribers! To celebrate this occasion, may I request Jkai & Rosette to do a duet (perhaps sing one of JJ Lin's English songs)? For your info, JJ ever released English songs 'I'm Alive" with Jason Mraz & "Bedroom" with Anne Marie. JJ also recorded at least one English song for each of his past Chinese albums.

陈楚生也值得被点评，他声音的松弛感，清澈感和美感是华语乐坛的另一个独特存在。

Hi Jkai & Rosette, Congrats on achieving 100K subscribers!

每次听这首歌我就想哭

my dad is not so old, but the story of his father was the same as the diary😢

Actually，only when you understand the artistic conception that the melody and the poetic lyrics create by corresponding to each other as a whole, can you deeply understand and have an empathy with Chinese Songs. Lyrics is a critical part of a song，especially Chinese songs，for you have thousands of expressions to bring out one single meaning in Chinese. So understanding the lyrics is about the history，culture and most importantly，lively real lives of ordinary people. And this may far more important than vocal techniques or this is a higher level than showing off sophisticated designs，especially in Chinese criteria. That is the key point that distinct an artist and a great artist，both classical and modern，Mandarin and Cantonese.🌸🌸🌸

希望能點評林憶蓮的現場。也是吃CD的華語頂級女歌手。大絕招就是：很多細微歌唱技巧藏在情感中! ＜歌手＞或是＜夢想的聲音＞都有滿多片段！

想看老師評論楊宗緯～

期待 我第一次听这个哭了一下午😂

想看李健-假如愛有天意

很好聽 不過我等了一星期的ado怎麼突然變會員專有影片了，難得想說能看到我最愛的歌手了 沒錢加會員QQ

不懂歌詞真的很難理解~尤其西方人的家庭倫理沒像中國人這樣深刻~這首甚至讓我想到朱自清寫的那篇散文~中國人對這種刻劃父子或母子的都很動人~像李宗盛"新寫的舊歌"~中國歌曲不是喜歡弄哭 聽眾~而是中國歌曲的詞本身就是占比很重的一部分~甚至我認為做詞比作曲還難

很高级

敲碗请求老师re一下李健的《一生所爱》，这首歌的live版本也有很多歌手的，比如杨子，李泉，刘惜君，卢冠廷，谭维维，张碧晨，莫文蔚，戴荃/金池，也许老师也可以来一次对比评测😊

老师可以听一下李健和谭咏麟合唱的传奇和水中花 ，两首歌合在一起唱的

是的，很久以前在你們頻道我也曾留下與你們評論相似的留言，當時似乎是這樣說的：不是澎湃激情或動感節奏搖滾的情感抒情歌，過多九彎十八拐的花式高音轉音，都會讓人覺得那首情感歌曲的演唱，失去了讓人相信融入歌曲情感的真誠度，所以情感抒情歌刻意過多高音轉音的使用，將使那首抒情歌演唱失去更多聽眾的情感共鳴度！

虽然在李健主场的评论区说这些有些不合时宜, 但是建议可以出一期张碧晨的《字字句句》🤣

这首歌如果没有介绍歌词，仅仅听音乐，所能传递的信息只有一半，希望介绍人能完整提供给老师。这就像bob dylan 的歌，如果没有歌词，就没有震撼的力量。

10:00 就是李健的歌声尽管看上去没有太多技巧，但也有很多巧思；就像化妆一样，李健属于裸装妆感，化妆但是让人觉得很舒服感受不到过多的妆容

歌词是中文歌很重要的一环，很多时候会决定歌曲的唱法，可不可以下次把歌词也翻译一下，要不感觉歌曲的美感根本就体会不到

要是有翻译英文她会哭😭

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敘事風格..李宗盛的歌也想讓大家聽聽

can you react to " the man " by seo eunkwang in immortal songs 2. He is a singer in Kpop and is well known as one of the best vocalist of all time in the kpop industry

看到了这种风格，想让老师评价一下陈楚生

歌唱的本身是來自歌詞的涵義去起調跟敘述的，如果只是單純的哼歌去展示技巧音調絕對沒問題。老師諸多對於中文歌曲有自我的見識或其它都無所謂。但是堅持己見，至於狹隘。以上。

阿云嘎(希拉草原)🙏

徐佳瑩-莉莉安

近年男歌手只喜歡兩個：李健和陳楚生😅

Would you please comment about Zhou Shen's version of My Heart Will Go On? Compare with Celine Dion's. Thanks

几时会评论曹格在我是歌手唱的(寂寞先生)呢😂😂

Hello, CZ Media and Rozette. I am not a singer, a songwriter or a musician. But I wrote a song for my mother in heaven. Will it be possible to do a reaction video to my song? I hope to share the song to more people. My mother in heaven might not be able to hear it, but I wish my song can bring some comfort to anyone listening, especially those who has experienced the loss of a loved one. I sincerely wish you can consider and take up this unusual request. Hopefully with your influence, the song can reach a greater audience.

好奇老师在鉴赏华语音乐时会对照歌词翻译吗。词的意蕴也是音乐美感的一个组成部分。

强烈建议小编给老师配个翻译字幕，让老师可以理解歌词😊

想聽老師評論李宗盛的山丘

半说半唱，想听听老师点评杨宗纬《底细》

我想知道老師最後唱什麼歌 很好聽～

我常覺得那個結他是致敬原唱吧。因為原唱都是下半部就放低了結他。

中间怎么一段没有背景音乐了？

想看評聲入人心1+2裡的所有歌手

跟李宗盛大師一樣說故事派的講唱的歌手。

想聽老師點評A-Lin, 陳綺貞，田馥甄的歌

可以试试416女团的戏腔reaction😊

记得这首有一版是有英文歌词字幕的，听哪个版本还能帮助老师理解这首歌

歌词翻译给老师

敲碗田馥甄~

who are the scientific study sampling tho? Not trying to argue anything but want to point out that most stats are not that convincing nowadays and if they are, quoting the summary are usually not (sry for being annoyingly nerdy 😅)

老师希望您有时间可以听听万能青年旅店的 杀死那个石家庄人 和 大石碎胸口 ,他不是声乐上的优美,希望能得到您的点评

非常推薦李宗盛的山丘或新寫的舊歌！

如果能夠看一下近幾年的《聲生不息》視頻,相信會發現更多好歌手👍

是否有機會點評韓國女歌手DAVICHI 姜敏京及李海莉

点评毛不易！！！！

李宗盛李宗盛❤

敲碗評論林憶蓮

什么时候听一下李克勤的歌 号称零瑕疵歌手😂

其实我感觉许飞的版本情绪更好更有感觉

既然听了李健了 马上顶一首董姿彦中和一哈

歌曲的成功不是主观的作曲，词和编曲也至关重要，这位老师不可能理解歌词的含义，了解当时的时代背景，贯穿这首歌曲的是情怀，许飞创作这首歌是怀念她的青少年和当时和父亲相处的时光

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ado新时代的预告咋不见了

這首歌曲重在「敘事歌詞」，不理解歌詞意思很可惜，感覺選歌選得不好，如果老師擅長聽聲樂李健應該有更多適合的歌

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