That’s how it is sometimes. Your bros one minute, then you see a beautiful girl and you fight over her with your best friend. You guys are amazing at acting. Although I feel like deep down you guys have that friendly rivalry down packed 😂 I loved it ✨
It’s a great first attempt. As an actor I tried to look at it with a critical eye. I’d like to offer some suggestions only to make it better, not to tear it apart. There don’t need to be so many camera angle cuts. Set it up on a tripod and get the whole scene from one angle. After that you can go in for mid and close ups to get important reactions. When the camera keeps shifting it take the viewer time to refocus on what they are seeing. Some of the story can get lost during that. Try not to cover your face when acting. In covering your mouth you were covering half of your face and we were losing your expressions. In a close up shot, the only way we know how you feel is through your face. Try not to talk over each other so much. Cutting each other off is a great tool, but talking at the same time just creates noise and no one can tell what is being said. If you must talk at the same time you need separate body mics and the ability to raise the sound of one over the other in editing so that we get the important words. The section where they were competing, while entertaining, was too long. In general, jokes come in threes. I’d say there was one too many things they competed at. Try to keep that shorter and save some of the ideas for future episodes. It can be tempting to want to put all of the funny things in to the first episode, but you need to plan out a few at a time. Leave us wanting more and plan ahead for what you will then give us. At times both of the actors, but one in particular, looked like they were going to laugh, or break character, when they shouldn’t. The camera sees everything and so will the audience. Take your time. Get the giggles out and then do a really great job. The audience would rather wait longer for an amazing show than have a mediocre on sooner. The dance competition was a good idea by itself, but redundant after the four competitions that had already happened. It needed to be one or the other. Either the series of competitions or the dance off, but not both. You’ve got a great start here. Don’t be afraid to take a class in film making. Everyone in this industry is always learning. I’ve been doing this for decades and I’m still learning. 💪🏻
Ah I really loved the concept and your performance ❤️.Had fun watching the cute fight between you two.And are you going to continue the with a second part?💞
Same goes to me and my friend we always end up having a crush to the same guys at school. And the thing is my friends and I are so happy hearing we like/crush the same person and every break time we always pass by to his classroom etc. lots of fun things to do with my friend. By the way you guys are so funny you made my day thanks :)
We aint gonna talk about what happened when that he was squating and the other boy got a "you know what" (i think.) Since no one is talking about it I had to say smth 😏😏🥵😭😭
