Hi, just to tell u guys this is not my new oc. my oc is secretly at the end🤫 This took a lot of time! Sorry that I haven’t posted in a while I was sick!
Hey guys! Thank you for the views and likes! I know a lot of you are saying make a part 2, i might make a part 2 but I don’t have any ideas, if you do please share!
maybe show that the parents are shocked, and the sister is also shocked and is like “I’m way better then her, and who wants an emotionless queen?” and maybe add a plot twist that she can have 1-3 emotions- Sad, happy and angry
Idk but maybe you can gain a couple emotions while watching everybody wanting for her to be the queen instead of her and her parents don’t want to and they protest and they finally give in?
the mean girls crown will go to the good girl and then her parents comanded the good girl to give the crown back and then it was too late the good girl was no longer emotionless she had emotions already then the bad brat girl will turn emotionless then the queen and king would say sorry to the good girl and then brat girl was a drama queen because she cried then the queen told her men to kick the brat girl out
Show the parents shocked and then the sister gets mad,and then the parents start asking why there voting for the other sister,then the others say the reasons. After that the parents will be angry at Isabela or Isabel for doing bad things,and then she could get grounded or something-in the meantime the emotionless sister will be queen and tell the parents to go somewhere else as they didn't like the emotionless sister. This might be alot to do,so I'm very sorry. This is optional and you can do the rest in part 3 if you can
One thing is off. The crown on monarchy is usually passed down to the oldest son in the family. If there is no boys to pass down the crown, it goes to the oldest daughter. So, speaking logically, the emotionless one supposed to have the crown anyways. Maybe it's another reason why people are angry - Isabell wasn't nice, and it's not her turn to rule.
PLEASE MAKE A PART 2!!! Idea for part 2: maybe make her the new queen, and then she smiles for the first time ever in her life, and then everybody’s cheering her on, and then, her family gets put away in the dungeon, (don’t know why) and then, you could make part 3 of that, where she died, but she had a child, named like, cherry, or, maya, or rosie, or anything, so she died and, she has a statue, and stuff, and then her child, becomes the next queen (we’ve forgotten about her family) Or don’t make a part three! I hope this inspires you 😊 Edit: I started reading this comment, and noticed my spelling, so sorry if I have bad spelling..
