hello , i loved it ........ i have a suggestion ........... why don't you become a story writer or maybe a novel writer ......... you can be a director or a producer too 👍
Story is really beautiful ❤❤❤ but it will be better, when you use good grammar English. Don't take it serious and don't be sad, take it as a compliment and improve your English. All the best🎉🎉