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3 Biggest Mistakes Writers Make With Their Second Draft - Shannan E. Johnson 

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Shannan E. Johnson, a native of Houston, TX, is a former creative executive at The Syfy Channel turned CEO of the first black-owned script consultancy in the entertainment industry, The Professional Pen. The Professional Pen is a writer-centered service provider helping emerging and established creatives develop their stories for the screen.
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Комментарии : 38   
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 2 месяца назад
Here is our full interview with Shannan - ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-EUd5hZL62MA.html
@remylebae3395
@remylebae3395 Год назад
Shannan is definitely in the top 3 best guests. Not only does she give so much information and tips, she's straight to the point. Never too long-winded and never too short. And her perspective and experience is so valuable. Thank you!!
@starwaving8857
@starwaving8857 6 месяцев назад
I don’t like how she solves her writing problem by outside force. It is weird. Who has this outlet?
@TwoThousandandOneProductions
Shannan is back! We love her.
@5Gburn
@5Gburn Год назад
She's so calming and knowledgeable. Sounds like a pithy observation, but it's not a common combo these days.
@ChristinaFonthes
@ChristinaFonthes Год назад
Yaaaas!!! We missed Shannan ✨✨✨✨
@yappygm7433
@yappygm7433 Год назад
Shannan is a force. I love her clarity of thought and her articulation.
@midnightjay
@midnightjay Год назад
I really enjoy Shannan's videos and her advice/lessons. Her advice is very universal and I feel like I always walk away with something greater each time I watch one.
@PrismCasillica
@PrismCasillica Год назад
Wonderful advice. I'm guilty of trying to trying to keep everything lean instead of trimming it later.
@lemuelcubase
@lemuelcubase Год назад
The wise one is back 🙌
@osw330904
@osw330904 Год назад
Truly
@5Gburn
@5Gburn Год назад
Every time I see Shannan's face, my brain lights up. "YAAAASSSSS," it says 😂
@avtpro
@avtpro Год назад
Thank you for this expert on this very valuable information.
@LouisWritingSomethingCrazy
@LouisWritingSomethingCrazy Год назад
Excellent advice that I definitely needed right now. 😊 Thanks
@dntliecate
@dntliecate Год назад
Thank you for the amazing content❤
@denisependleton554
@denisependleton554 Год назад
Love her comments. I would love to have her as a consultant. When I can afford her 😊
@jimjo8541
@jimjo8541 6 месяцев назад
She’s my favorite brain on this account. Insightful. To the point. Clear.
@SHONNER
@SHONNER Год назад
A second pair of eyes was the best thing that helped me before doing my second draft.
@phoenixr6811
@phoenixr6811 Год назад
Insightful 🤔
@user-zd1jh5zz9n
@user-zd1jh5zz9n 11 месяцев назад
Go Shannan you said a mouth full in the first few paragraphs. I forced myself to make a deadline for a contest. It's in consideration for the end of the month. I went and printed out the project and went away from it for over a week. I went back and found a thousand things wrong with it. I now have everything very very close but I'll have to enter it in a different contest. Oh well. It taught me to make sure all future submissions are ready a few weeks before the contest starts or ends. Go back through them and find the tons of things you thought were done and correct. A very good video... Thank you. Film Courage.
@ShannanEJohnson
@ShannanEJohnson 10 месяцев назад
You'll get it next time. 💚
@concernedcitizen7385
@concernedcitizen7385 Год назад
Great stuff! 😀
@gabrielradovangracabig2664
@gabrielradovangracabig2664 Год назад
wise as always shannan
@Wordsley
@Wordsley Год назад
These Rock!
@deadseamonster
@deadseamonster Год назад
Shannan's back!
@bigzaymadden
@bigzaymadden Год назад
All hail Shannan! 👏🏾
@filmcourage
@filmcourage Год назад
Have you ever wrtten a perfect second draft?
@jerrop
@jerrop Год назад
Hey am a beginner in writing I have a question,,is freelancing a better way to start my career in screenwriting??
@5Gburn
@5Gburn Год назад
Blahhhhhhahhhh I do a *minimum* of 4 or 5 drafts (I don't know if it matters that I write narrative fiction rather than screenplays). My draft quality/effort index/fallout rankings: 1. Titanic 2. Interstellar 3. The Matrix 4. Cabin in the Woods 5. X-Files: I Want to Believe X Sunshine Cleaning 6. Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind 7. Die Hard X Rocky Bonus feel-good flick: Groundhog Day (proofreading) If you ever get to a Don't Look Up stage, it's time for a rewrite.
@niecokapikie7476
@niecokapikie7476 Год назад
I need water and forgiveness for my first draft
@sevenbark
@sevenbark Год назад
I love listening to a master talking about their craft.
@bqgin
@bqgin Год назад
bruh, I've been keeping a story in my head for few years before writing it down and you expect me to forget it all in a week?
@ShannanEJohnson
@ShannanEJohnson 10 месяцев назад
Lol. You'll be surprised how fresh it'll look to you after a week.
@filmcourage
@filmcourage Год назад
What do you emphasize when working on a second draft?
@caseyboughton6641
@caseyboughton6641 Год назад
Structure! Story strength. I usually have somewhat organic / natural dialogue, though sometimes over-written, and punchy, interesting-ish characters. Story logic and momentum, transitions and entertainment drive (keeping reader locked-in, turning the pages, needing to know what happens next & how it's resolved) is what I am fighting for and bushwhacking through in the re-write process. With a machete and a chainsaw, it sometimes fees like.
@Storyraymond
@Storyraymond 10 месяцев назад
What she said about a Woman being mean to her husband might have nothing to do about him (at least some of the times😂) might have nothing to do with him, hit me. I’ve been thinking about this about me and my wife several times.
@schm00b0
@schm00b0 Год назад
If you can, get a thrid, fourth, fifth (and so on) set of eyes! More eyes and brains see and will think about stuff, it is better than just you looking at your story. There are no geniuses, whatever anyone says!
@ericjohnson8326
@ericjohnson8326 Год назад
As usual cuts through, clarifies and explains It in layman's terms. Awesome as usual.
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