@@nameinprogress1319actually the OP is right, it's VENTURE LIFE, search the official lyrics. People thought it was "it's your life" because of engrish.
I have a bit of a critique for the beginning and the end, as the notes feel a little... Off. But you've got the chorus splendidly, and that was the most important part. Bravo!
If you would like an RPG series heavier on the fantasy side might I the Trails of Alteah or for something older Final Fantasy 4, 7, 8, 9 and Dragon Quest 1-3.
I wanna hear you do other persona tracks now, especially "Darkness" from P3FES, "unavoidable battle" from Reload/3 or "rivers in the desert" from 5, "gentle madman" or "Throw away your mask" from 5 Royal