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A conversation about screenwriting with a Slamdance script reader 

Dean Peter2on
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I sat down with one of my most talented friends, Joslyn Jensen. She's an accomplished actor, screenwriter, and script reader for festival competitions like Slamdance. By her account she reads over 200 scripts a year.
We get into what she's come across in all the scripts she's read: common red flags, what makes a script stand out, if screenplay competitions are worth it, what's she's learned for her own work, and how to write a good log line. As well as tons of other great advice for screenwriters of all levels of experience.
It was so much fun to pick her brain, it's a conversation that any screenwriter or filmmaker won't want to miss.
Check out Joslyn's site Script Eater: www.script-eater.com/
0:00 My friend Joslyn
0:54 Things she sees over and over
5:32 Screenplay competitions
7:08 Two things every screenwriter should do
13:04 Red flags in scripts
17:50 Are competitions worth it?
19:20 Giving yourself little treats
22:49 When a movie comes out that's similar to yours
23:52 Lessons she's learned for her own work
28:28 Switching to better audio
28:38 Tips for new screenwriters
30:19 Should screenwriters read other scripts?
33:11 Does formatting matter?
38:54 Play scripts vs. screenplays
41:35 How to tell if something should be a film or a series
44:27 How to write a great logline
49:23 Outro
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Комментарии : 158   
@johnpaulsylvester3727
@johnpaulsylvester3727 Месяц назад
“Write it like it could be produced over and over.” Brilliant advice!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Yeah so interesting!
@ZionistWorldOrder
@ZionistWorldOrder 19 дней назад
like.. be vague? not too detailed?
@Oldtoby1138
@Oldtoby1138 2 дня назад
Joslyn Jensen brings an insane amount of knowledge, experience, and passion to bear in this conversation. I found myself taking notes! Thanks for uploading this!
@iMitchellBurney
@iMitchellBurney 3 дня назад
The transitions insight was something I’ve always seen and liked when it’s done well, so to hear it being used as a tool with intention is amazing! Film truly is its own medium with unique features to it. And it’s cool to see what I can use for my writing and see how others implement in their work.
@patrickmurray9359
@patrickmurray9359 Месяц назад
I hammered you in the comments for your Sundance episode. So it gives me great pleasure to compliment you on an awesome episode with an awesome guest. She was interesting, the questions were on point, and her perspective is of value to budding screenwriters and the information useful and worth noting. I am probably a bit biased as she gave off strong "don't bore us, get to the chorus" vibes in her suggestions, which I appreciate.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Glad you found it informative
@dannyt4663
@dannyt4663 Месяц назад
I got a lot from this conversation, thank you. Fantastic insights. I sift through so much unhelpful content and its gems like this that makes all that time worth it. Appreciate you both
@MosesTY
@MosesTY 2 дня назад
34:09 is gold in understanding the true purpose of formatting. Thanks for this…
@mcclureross
@mcclureross Месяц назад
Great video Dean. I've been enjoying your content but this video kicks things up a notch. Well done for getting Joslyn onboard as she has some great notes and as someone who is writing a feature right now, it helps to see this kind of content. Keep it up man!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Glad you enjoyed it!
@ksheetijsaini
@ksheetijsaini 20 дней назад
I really apprciate you guys for taking out the time to create this. Thank you!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 18 дней назад
Thanks for watching!
@Jesus.the.Christ
@Jesus.the.Christ Месяц назад
I'm really glad I sat through this. It was a fine interview, but personally I'm familiar with what Joslyn was saying. Except her idea about what makes a series! That is a fantastic insight. Thank you.
@ryanholladay5665
@ryanholladay5665 25 дней назад
This is really great. Fantastic interview and super insightful wisdom from her.
@PranavBhasin
@PranavBhasin 25 дней назад
What a fantastic conversation. I love how personal it is, and how it doesn't try to be 'ideal'.
@digitalnomadart
@digitalnomadart 20 дней назад
That was a fantastic and inspiring deep dive into her understanding of screenwriting. I'll have to listen to this periodically to keep her fine points in the forefront of my mind as I work on my own screenwriting. I like the part where she said that the logline is a portal. That will always stick with me now whenever I write a logline.
@arthousefilms
@arthousefilms 3 дня назад
Thanks for this! That was an excellent conversation and she gave lots of food for thought.
@CoreySwordGuy
@CoreySwordGuy Месяц назад
Great interview!
@cjolet
@cjolet Месяц назад
Really helpful conversation! Thanks so much.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Glad you enjoyed it!
@gringogarcia2296
@gringogarcia2296 27 дней назад
Brilliant. So much great info to implement. Thank you for sharing.
@v-22
@v-22 Месяц назад
Anything worth watching has a thesis, a question that must be answered, whether it's a feature or series. Most series pose the question, some can answer (e.g. True Detective) others don't bother (e.g Lost) -- mainly because they can't . The difference between a feature and a series is that a series needs an "engine".
@-iIIiiiiiIiiiiIIIiiIi-
@-iIIiiiiiIiiiiIIIiiIi- Месяц назад
She should have her own podcast.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
I agree!
@theworldisyourstotaste6185
@theworldisyourstotaste6185 17 дней назад
That was great. Very informative and as a screen writer quite refreshing to hear! Look forward to your next video!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 16 дней назад
Glad you enjoyed it!
@fredrik241
@fredrik241 Месяц назад
This was great to watch. Interesting, entertaining and educational. It was funny when Joslyn complained about people being too on the nose in scripts, while putting her finger on her own nose.
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
Neat! We need more of these. Cheers !!!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Glad you enjoyed it!
@SugarRushTimes2030-gs3qp
@SugarRushTimes2030-gs3qp Месяц назад
In the last short I wrote for my blog, after a description I put ‘you know the look’ and I didn’t even know writers were speaking to the reader. I wrote that in instinctively for a hypothetical director to interpret it to direct the actor. Great info especially for someone like me trying to learn and get better
@Sisanf
@Sisanf Месяц назад
Great convo! She’s super knowledgeable and passionate about the craft
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Thanks for watching!
@jonathanperkins4154
@jonathanperkins4154 18 дней назад
Thanks for this! Wonderful content.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 18 дней назад
Thanks for watching!
@mattstiltner7499
@mattstiltner7499 25 дней назад
This is great content; she seems very genuine rather than trying to sell you on something.
@addistesfu2424
@addistesfu2424 Месяц назад
Keep up what you are doing, it's great and helpful in a practical way
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Thanks for watching!
@burgeroraclefilmco
@burgeroraclefilmco Месяц назад
This was great, man. Thanks
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Thanks for watching
3 дня назад
Great Stuff dude thanks for this]!
@arcalypse1101
@arcalypse1101 4 дня назад
Damn she's insightful, you can tell she has passion for her craft I love it. Great questions too Dean, don't think I didn't pick up on those, alley-oops!
@markothwriter
@markothwriter 5 дней назад
As far as series go, Sopranos did have an answer at the end. It was so satisfying that Tony Soprano did have an end.
@geoffhoutman1557
@geoffhoutman1557 26 дней назад
Great point about trailer spoilers. Personally I believe nothing from the second half of the flick should be in the trailer, UNLESS it’s a misrepresentation. Love letting the audience go “I know wat happens here” and then “wait what?”
@atharvalangote8258
@atharvalangote8258 21 день назад
Thank you..
@makball6478
@makball6478 Месяц назад
i giggled when u said the better audio starts now
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Get ready!
@HughGuiney
@HughGuiney Месяц назад
I thought this was a Sara Dietschy video when I first saw the thumbnail… Did a double take when Dean popped up. 😂 Great convo though; excited to hear that this will be a series!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Haha
@jinchoung
@jinchoung Месяц назад
yea. CELEBRATIONS are huuuuuuuge. the dopamine system definitely needs to be trained to reward accomplishments. great point. ooooo... and "court transcript"! that's gold!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Her reward idea is so good.
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
Pavlov likes this comment.
@hiplessboy
@hiplessboy 24 дня назад
I really liked that! I hope you do a regular conversation series with her. I think the thing she kept harping on - how there should be subtext in films, how she liked that script where a couple were having sex and then you discover later that they are married to different people - that Possum logline ------ all those things required the audience to connect two dots the writer set up, but which they did not join for the reader. But when the audience makes that connection themselves, they get a little jolt of dopamine. I bet she likes puzzles too.
@SGB-yk9rp
@SGB-yk9rp 20 дней назад
These two said the word "like" so often I felt as if I was at some high schooler's chill session. I just couldn't get through it.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 18 дней назад
Sorry you're not chill enough.
@user-sc9vp2ku6c
@user-sc9vp2ku6c 7 дней назад
I have a terrible time with “like” also
@TJUC123
@TJUC123 4 дня назад
Well thanks a fucking lot for pointing that out. Like like like like like FUCKING LIKE!!!!! I wouldn’t have noticed it until you fucking had to say some shit!!!!!
@edo.creative
@edo.creative 26 дней назад
Great video! for future use, I'd use Adobe's Free Audio Cleanup tool to remove the echo and make everything sound fantastic!
@theghostsofgiants
@theghostsofgiants 13 дней назад
I wish this was twice as long as it is lol (you should do one with Frank too)
@CentaurusRelax314
@CentaurusRelax314 6 дней назад
I always thought a "pre-lap" was the other way around: audio from the *next* scene enters before the end of the previous scene. She's describing some sort of carry-over thing, and i don't remember ever knowing what that would be called..... Post-lap? Oh, well-Reddit doesn't have the answer, so it must not exist..... I always wonder how well readers do with their own material. Like, what's the qualification for becoming the arbiter/gatekeeper? I'm sure i'm just bitter after my one paid reader gave me 'notes' that were... bad. Answers to the few questions he had were clearly presented in the script; some comments represented that he didn't understand the simplest, most obvious elements or intentions; it was obvious that the reader brought strong personal biases and dismissed elements that are common in some of my favorite (and also widely-acclaimed) films.
@markothwriter
@markothwriter 6 дней назад
I think that the screenplay format is imperfect. And it never will be perfect because there is no one standard reader or standard purpose for the screenplay across the industry. I rarely played around doing exceptions or breaking the rules. I generally stuck with the basics. But it is not a perfect format in part because people wanted more editorial from me and they didn't get it... Now, I'm writing for a director that I know really well - and he wants more information in there -- and it won't go through any industry readings. So, now I'm writing it with some narration.
@FrancisGo.
@FrancisGo. 18 дней назад
Yay yeah. ❤
@DaneDavenport
@DaneDavenport Месяц назад
Please have Joslyn back to live up to her word that she could talk about pitching for another hour. We would listen!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
We'll do another one!
@DaneDavenport
@DaneDavenport Месяц назад
@@deanpeter2on I'll make it an appointment watch!
@leskanekuni6310
@leskanekuni6310 26 дней назад
Great interview marred by bad sound for half of it. Always monitor your recording.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 20 дней назад
Yep
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
The bad thing about this conversation is that it ends. Even though the caracters are not exactly likable. lol. Thank you!
@benjamindover4337
@benjamindover4337 22 дня назад
Thanks. It's good to know what readers are looking for. I mean, aside from the race and gender of the author. Obviously those are the most important things.
@bruhhhhh718
@bruhhhhh718 7 дней назад
the best prelap was jon snow from baby to king
@film_magician
@film_magician 26 дней назад
Thank you for fixing the audio lol
@evanburns9182
@evanburns9182 Месяц назад
Definitely cool to hear from the perspective of someone who has read 1000s of scripts, but it would be nice to also consider the heavy production side of things a bit more. From the perspective of a cinematographer, formatting matters a great deal. Page ratios, unnecessary camera language, etc. are hugely impactful when we shoot movies. Ultimately, it’s dependent on the director, but I can’t tell you how many times a poorly formatted script has damaged production…
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Totally, more people need to keep that in mind.
@XxSEETH3RxX
@XxSEETH3RxX 11 дней назад
Shane Black, imo started the whole talking to the reader. All his scripts did it.
@southlondon86
@southlondon86 День назад
Predator?
@XxSEETH3RxX
@XxSEETH3RxX День назад
@southlondon86 Not sure what you're asking. He acted in Predator and wrote one. But The Last Boy Scout, Lethal Weapon, etc in description he talks to the reader
@ryanhowell4492
@ryanhowell4492 Месяц назад
Cool
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
For sure
@ryanhowell4492
@ryanhowell4492 Месяц назад
@@deanpeter2on I plan on creating horror movie to get ahead of this year’s halloween
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
@@ryanhowell4492 that's a good idea!
@ryanhowell4492
@ryanhowell4492 Месяц назад
@@deanpeter2on that's not going to be easy
@kyleobo5027
@kyleobo5027 27 дней назад
Ya’ll ever go to like a video twice
@dkkeyz8815
@dkkeyz8815 Месяц назад
6:26 nothing is equal to sneaky ninja cat!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
🥷
@Sketchophrenic
@Sketchophrenic Месяц назад
Why do you think young screenwriters are drawn to writing about parents dying and/or overcoming a parents death?
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
I don't know but I made a whole feature about it!
@brandonrobertkersjes
@brandonrobertkersjes 27 дней назад
Because my Dad died.
@v-22
@v-22 Месяц назад
Good info but it's little annoying that she loves reading Billy Wilder but hates when writers use camera work, given that Billy Wilder always used camera direction in his screenplays. Sure, he directed his scripts but so could some of us.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
I think it's different when a writer is also going to direct the script.
@Filmmaker809
@Filmmaker809 Месяц назад
It does help Dean that she is an actor who already has representation by the way, with an agent thus allowing them to easily get into screenwriting. Now actors have a massive advantage over screenwriters who do not have representation.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
I don't know if she does have representation!
@patrickmurray9359
@patrickmurray9359 Месяц назад
I would say her hard work, networking, disciplined writing, actually completing projects, talent, intellectual curiosity and "putting herself out there" (e.g. reader for contests, for hire coverage, etc.) has a lot more to do with her success than whether or not she has représentation for selling her scripts or getting work helping with other people's scripts. If she has représentation it's probably because of all those other things I mentioned. That said, an actor's agent isn't likely to be of much use when it comes to selling scripts. Even amongst actors, agents often specialize (TV, theatrical, stage, commercial).
@Filmmaker809
@Filmmaker809 Месяц назад
@@patrickmurray9359 Representation helps whether you agree or disagree its fact, especially in the UK!
@jamk2668
@jamk2668 Месяц назад
You should take a look at her credits. She hasn't acted in anything remotely well known or critically lauded.
@patrickmurray9359
@patrickmurray9359 Месяц назад
@@Filmmaker809 you don't get representation just because you ask for it is my point.
@briansimerl4014
@briansimerl4014 24 дня назад
Sounds like these scripts have to please a wide variety of people to win.
@vinayhkamath
@vinayhkamath 11 дней назад
Could you please reign in the use of 'like'. Thank you.
@chuckycheese8
@chuckycheese8 Месяц назад
what is that tattoo?
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Not sure!
@spiralgold9760
@spiralgold9760 Месяц назад
There is a way to clean up the audio..worth using some ai tools for!
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
I did as much as I could, audio is not my forte clearly!
@spiralgold9760
@spiralgold9760 Месяц назад
@@deanpeter2on ah fair enough! :)
@nh8444
@nh8444 Месяц назад
I despise the push for diversity in scripts. If it’s an all black cast, great (that’s not diversity) if it’s an all white cast or female cast or Asian or whatever, the gender, ethnicity, and whatever else should fit the story. What a horrible thing to do to creativity and other genders and races, shoehorn them in, cuz it’s trendy to do. Then they make you feel bad if you don’t. Reverse racism is still racism. No wonder most movies suck nowadays. No matter who it is, they shouldn’t be included as almost an afterthought, add them because they fit the story. The writers strike got them no jobs and scorn from the public. Well deserved. Pandering is disgraceful. Make this character black, cuz we don’t have enough diversity, this character no one cares about, I don’t think writers and those pushing this are doing the good thing they think they’re doing.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
That's not how it works but okay!
@hiplessboy
@hiplessboy 24 дня назад
It feels so good to be able to blame something!
@nh8444
@nh8444 24 дня назад
@@hiplessboy lol I used to be further led than I am now, I started listening to both sides of the news and was horrified to see how much the left no media is lying. It all started there. If you don’t look outside the bubble, you’ll never be able to think anything different from them.
@Jackhoppy
@Jackhoppy 19 дней назад
Are those lavs even on?
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 18 дней назад
Not at the beginning smdh 😔
@HollyHargreaves
@HollyHargreaves 17 дней назад
It's fine. I'm 15 mins in & engrossed in the conversation. The sound is not distracting at all. Mistakes happen.
@Jackhoppy
@Jackhoppy 17 дней назад
@@HollyHargreaves agreed
@kaseylum8625
@kaseylum8625 16 дней назад
screnwriting
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 16 дней назад
100%
@thisricardopalma
@thisricardopalma Месяц назад
I see you try a similar setup as Matt D'Avella for the interview. ;)
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
What setup does he use?
@thisricardopalma
@thisricardopalma Месяц назад
@@deanpeter2on ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-qdSMbUi6Ct8.htmlsi=xHVpFfKtRLMxdkyb
@lselson
@lselson 8 дней назад
Writing coming from a hive of people who are not the same is how you destroy good scripts and turn them in The Rings of Power of some other shite like that. Sinular voices with a singular vision retains the creativity and doesn't dilute the story with DEI crap.
@MsBob314
@MsBob314 28 дней назад
One of the best screenwriting interviews! I’ve written 30+ scripts, won awards and had two features made that were internationally distributed. Still so much to learn and reenforce. Love what she said about subtext, as that’s one of the biggest falls in badly made movies and TV. We speak in subtext constantly - every time we speak nicely to a boss we hate, every time our wife says I’M FINE!!! - and she’s not actually fine, every time we speak in one way, while hiding another emotion behind it. And Joslyn’s gorgeous. Thanks for the eye candy.
@YouthSalad
@YouthSalad 28 дней назад
I was vibing with this comment up until the last 2 sentences. What the fuck bro.
@darkknightwithanidea1845
@darkknightwithanidea1845 Месяц назад
You have to wonder with this generation of ‘script readers’ would they understand the complexity of say a script like Network , One flew Over The Cuckoos Nest, Midnight Exoress ? Or have their brains been so white washed by life inexperiences with so much ‘JUNK’ that they can’t decipher the difference between a potential masterpiece & just another Barbie or Marvel hashtag. ✒️🎬🎥✒️
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Some might argue that Barbie IS in fact a masterpiece.
@patrickmurray9359
@patrickmurray9359 Месяц назад
It's hard to write a masterpiece like One Flew Over The Cuckoo's Nest, it isn't hard to know you're reading a masterpiece like One Flew... Your examples, except Midnight Express, are brilliant films but they aren't complex plots. They are full of subtext and explore themes that may or may not resonate with a reader, but I wouldn't be so dismissive of the younger generation that you can't find readers who can pick up on those themes and whatever question(s) those films are trying to answer.
@anthonymisiano256
@anthonymisiano256 Месяц назад
@darkknightwithanidea1845 You say life inexperiences, yet most songs you grew up listening to and loving were written by guys in their early 20's. Stephen King wrote Carrie, Salem's Lot, The Shining, Children of the Corn and several others all before 30. I needn't mention Shakespeare. I'm almost 40 now, but can attest that the emotional impact individual pieces of art had on me was much more powerful when I was younger. There's no correlation between age and talent; or taste. Bonus fact, Ken Kesey was 25 when he started writing Cuckoo's Nest (27 when it got published).
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
@@deanpeter2on Yep. I myself enjoyed it on at least three different levels.
@peckerdecker
@peckerdecker Месяц назад
*Modern mainstream* movies *sukk* because: 1) hammy dialogue 2) crude and tackyness (foul language / Gore and violence) 3) wooden characters (with actors that would fit in perfectly at IKEA/ a furniture store) Where's the subtlety? Where's the finesse? *Thankfully* - cause of *Internet* and _smartphones_ - *anyone* can tell and *anyone can make a story* and share. Stay happy everyone:)
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 29 дней назад
What’s a modern movie you like?
@TREKKS_
@TREKKS_ Месяц назад
You look like the long lost brother of seth rogan
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Thank you.
@jamk2668
@jamk2668 Месяц назад
"Content is the most important thing" This is the issue with most people these days. They care about content as opposed to form. Film is not a medium for storytelling. "I don't care about stories. I never did. Every story is the same. We have no new stories. We're just repeating the same ones. I really don't think, when you do a movie that you have to think about the story. The film isn't the story. It's mostly picture, sound, a lot of emotions. The stories are just covering something." - Bella Tar
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
"Film is not a medium for storytelling" is a bold take!
@thereccher8746
@thereccher8746 Месяц назад
You know it's amazing. Literally every word of that was wrong. I mean nothing you said was correct.
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
​@@thereccher8746 Delightful, isn't it? -- I mean, this micro-second, I indulge in "Maybe he's got a point..." Then ok, nah... Earth's still round-ish. Ah, semant... I mean, syntax!
@bruhhhhh718
@bruhhhhh718 7 дней назад
jesus that was dumb
@Robertsmith-un5cu
@Robertsmith-un5cu Месяц назад
What’s funny is how much utterly unproducible stuff makes it to the later stages of competitions. The competitions tend to weigh very heavily towards DEI stuff. The more lgbt / oppressed women etc the more likely you’ll get into the final rounds. It’s really a joke how they don’t care for original shit. It’s just what fits the current paradigm of what’s good to be writing about. Never submitting to another contest again since I don’t write for the current political bend in vogue
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
Ok
@anthonymisiano256
@anthonymisiano256 Месяц назад
Every era has its political agenda. Trends come and go. The foundational story and characters need to be great, and if they are the cream will rise to the top. Great films stand the test of time because they're simply great, no matter how they're dressed. The fluff coated in popular trappings become forgotten.
@Robertsmith-un5cu
@Robertsmith-un5cu Месяц назад
Not really. You can submit your material to many contests and if you’re in an industry full of people who generally all believe the same stuff and are grading the same ways then your story will not get beyond them. Practically every person I’ve spoken to with scripts that made it into latter rounds of selection fit the woke DEI messaging. who knows how many great scripts go unproduced because studios are more interested in checking boxes off than making original ideas. it might pass one day but damage is being done. Time wasted. Talent wasted.
@PCIMPOSSIBLE
@PCIMPOSSIBLE 14 дней назад
Her cute face made me watch 'til the end.
@kitcassim4156
@kitcassim4156 22 дня назад
Let me guess, only wrote scripts that are about feminist ideology and how masculinity is bad, etc?
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on 20 дней назад
Yep!
@MsBob314
@MsBob314 28 дней назад
Can you say the word “like” a few THOUSAND more times????!!!! C’mon!!! I can listen no longer.
@hiplessboy
@hiplessboy 24 дня назад
best just to leave
@MsBob314
@MsBob314 9 дней назад
@@hiplessboyI did
@tezzag818
@tezzag818 Месяц назад
Count how many times you use the word “like”, so distracting.
@deanpeter2on
@deanpeter2on Месяц назад
I am sorry
@tezzag818
@tezzag818 Месяц назад
I apologise if I offended you, but the constant use of “like” makes you both sound adolescent.
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
@@tezzag818 Interesting feedback. And... that is important because...
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
Have you considered stopping counting? Maybe you would get the important bits. I am the Grammar Police myself in my group, but that was just rude, not fun or funny-which are the only ways to get away with that. That's basic etiquette; every adolescent knows. You're welcome.
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu Месяц назад
@@deanpeter2on Don't be. That's ludicrous. I haven't even noticed. Now I probably will next time I see it.
@LoiselsPhotography
@LoiselsPhotography 24 дня назад
Sigh...... this is just a bunch of common sense BS. What a waste of a video.
@hiplessboy
@hiplessboy 24 дня назад
good luck with your career!
@mattwilmshurst8456
@mattwilmshurst8456 25 дней назад
most commonly used word - Like.
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