This is so true I am a rapper myself from northeast india , couple years ago I used to think how these rappers be freestylin off the top and I wanted to do it too and I practiced and it works for u now I don't even need to put much effort to freestyle
This is good for writers block. But IMO the best way to write is to start by feeling something. Whatver that emotion is you should try finding the words to express that emotion. Keep starting over on that rhyme/line till you feel 110% satisfied with the rhyme (until it’s the closest way to perfectly describe that feeling inside) and build off that. That’s how I write.
This needs to be trending like now now , this helped me out more than those 30 minute videos i been watching. You thought about No money in your hands What can you do So you put out some plans You decided to make How to write rhymes For your fans This is better than any man Has ever done They put out 30 minutes videos But in 3 minutes and 50 seconds You got it done WELL DONE❤👑
dang i expected this to be pretty bad seeing the amount of views and likes but to be honest, this is actually a great theme ya got going on here good job and thank you! :)
Basically everything goes as long as it sounds good on the beat. And it's great if you can think of clever word play. But most of the time you need to have talent to do that. Sometimes I can write good rhymes, mostly when I'm sad lol. Thanks 4 da vid!
Respect the effort, but the structure isn't streamlined. "Discipline a bridge to what you want from what you give To sit upon it be honest astonished, condescending kids" rhyme more, use the annunciation like drums. Try to end words with a consonant and begin the next word with the same consonant. Have fun with the words, don't write a book between rhymes. " I saw a duck on a lake, last summer my mom and dad went to cancun and bought a rolex for cheap and had it in their luggage and when they went to the airport the security checkpoint inspected it and asked if it was a rolex and turns out it was fake" That's what it sounds like to me when people don't flow proper.
This is some solid constructive criticism. Reading this in contrast to the thought process he described in the video created a pretty cool panoramic perspective. In my experience, you both got flows, but who knows? I'll be watchin out to see who's at the shows. For my part, I don't look at either one of you as foes, but I won't blink for a second if my highs are y'all's lows.
(Rate this on a scale from 1 to 10) Confidence - I made my first decision I'll put myself in that position Where i feel like flying Without Hesittation Now listen to my freakin recitation God gave me confidence, No jokin Ultimate loneliness is what you fearin? His love is handmade You sure you vibin? Without the taste of spiritual livin -by future Gospel rapper
🌼read mine 🌼 Bars on my mind Things changed when I started growing up Depression level it's going up and up They all tryna stop me but I ain't gon give up Thought everything gon be easy but nah man it's damn tough Even though I give my all it's still not enough I'm running I'm running out of time Hiding from everybody like I did a crime Mixing up my brain with my feelings and just tryna rhyme I'm just tryna rhyme They say they knew that I'm gon fall again They love when I'm in pain Now they shouting that i can't do it I got aim I'm gon pursue it Haters mind I'm gon blew it Earning my name man it's a dream one day I'm gon make it BARS ON MY MIND one day I'm gon break it I'm running I'm running out of time Hiding from everybody like I did a crime Mixing up my brain with my feelings and just tryna rhyme I'm just tryna rhyme Earning my name it's a dream One day I'm gon make it Bars on my mind one day I'm gon break ( one day I'm gon break it ) Written by : sami😁🌹
you make it sound so easy . you yake a random sentence and say let's make it sound good and boom 💥 . discipline is the bridge separating what you want and what you got cooling in a fridge bridge is not only rhymimg with fridge discipline is rhyming with separating and cooling
@@RappingManualYT def man, im working on my flow and multi syllable rhyming . Your video's have helped me a lot . i recorded a track recently using just my phone and uploaded it people really loved it. Without you it wouldn't have been possible. i would love it if you would do some videos about mixing or how to do layers for hook . A lot of people have trouble doing that including me. anyways dude love you and your work❤❤
Well, it depends on who you ask. As far as I know, hook and chorus are the same thing, but some people call the chorus a "hook" if your song starts with it, in a way, "hooking" them in. To be honest, as long as your song has variability in terms of its components and their placement, don't worry about any names. If you get a listener to listen to the whole thing - it's a win. : ) Hope that clear things up.
Ok this actually helped me out quite a bit. Also I have a vs rap: I don't wanna brag,but I'm kinda awsome,my IQ so big,titans call it colossal,if I'm so smart you might think I'm weak,but unlike you,I train all week,yea under those sleeves there are tricks. Im shinier than a star,not using any lotion,they say when I run,Im faster than a car in motion,Do u need a new rap? cause Im a model of insparation,if u think u can win,u got capped by a whole nation.
i used your example with russian rap, and it works quite well, thank you дисциплина это мост, разделяющая где ты щас и где ты хочешь быть, но путь по нему не прост но людям вместо мотивации в них просыпается злость на людей которые в отличии от них прошли этот блокпост
