thank you guys for all the lovely comments :D i know they're more for tom than for my script but i'd like to think i gave some writer/directorial advice ;) (not that they needed much i picked them to read it 'cause they were the best in the class) i wish i still had the audio from the rest of the workshop to share with you guys, these two helped me so much throughout the whole class! Xx
Hi Cassie, congrats for the writting and direction. I have one quesito, can You please tell me the name of the school that You take classes. I'm not from England and i want to study dramatic arts there?
“You’re beautiful.” “That’s not funny.” “It’s not a joke.” Holy moly sister my heartttt. Those words are gorgeous, and of course my heart melted hearing Tom say that even if it isn’t to me. ❤️
I know right, he’s so sweet and adorable in this clip, I bet that’s how he is with woman who he finds attractive and is the perfect gentleman to all women !! ❤️🥺
that might be because he did a bit of ad-libbing/variation from the script (this was our second run through) (and btw the teacher was NOT impressed by him doing that aha) so him doing less blatant reading etc. makes for a more natural flow :D
Aww I can understand if the teacher wanted you guys to just follow the script, but to be fair to Tom, that's his acting style, and it kinda depends on what philosophy you have when you approach a script. 😂 I'd take it as a compliment, as you probably did too, that he could do a variation of the script so easily. That's partly the writing, you know. 😆
I have to admit i clicked this video for tom but i stayed because of how beautifully written this scene is. i understand that tom was ad libbing a little but if it was that easy for him to ad lib the original script itself would still have to be a work of art in itself. i know that sometimes when you're given a bad script that it can be hard to find places to improvise or ad lib but as i said before amazing actors reading an amazing script.
This is a great script acted out by two great people. The way you wrote the chemistry and the feeling of being an awkward yet confident young adult works very well in the situation presented!
Can't believe he's 18 here hahaha, I want this genes xd I wonder if You'll ever see this, but please Tom - STAY YOU foreva. Never spoil because of fame. You are SO FREKIN' GREAT
I came for Tom but I've now watched this 3 times in 10 minutes because it's such a cute little script which really portrays the awkwardness of the situation, I think it's absolutely lovely and you did an amazing job writing it ❤️ xx
Honestly I really enjoyed the script! It was so similar to a past experience with a guy that I dated that I couldn't help squealing a bit once Tom's character started seriously flirting. 10/10 Great work!!!!
I know I'm late but this scene is beautifully written, the acting was obviously great, but that script is one of the most incredible things I have ever heard
I like how super-natural it feels the whole scene like, a lot of the time scripts can be really over the top and dramatic and just not at all believable for say, a teenagers dialect or whatever but it genuinely seemed like they were just two people having a conversation and it flowed really well and it's also not overly awkward i like that, it's just the right amount :)
I love Tom but can I just say how much I love this script? You both did such a good job on performing it but this script just felt super fresh - amazing job 💗