A Pair Of Moronic Mercenaries [SFM] 

TheInfectedFilms I want to see part 2

TheInfectedFilms yesh, episode 2 is a good idea.

TheInfectedFilms qlaa

TheInfectedFilms sdf

TheInfectedFilms ?

How can the medic understand him?

@@ninjauser3808 when you spend some time with a teammate, you can pick up a thing or two on what Pyro is saying.

@@ninjauser3808 because he is medic

Ok 👍 that iq is gone for me bye

If anyone asks, it was a rental for these guns 😂😂😂😂

erin moore i did not even noticed, as if it was normal XD

Is a Matrix ,Movie Reference boi

TheInfectedFilms.... Good vid i have been a subscriber for about.... Idk a really long time and yes i would like to so more Of this (i would Also like more moron vs machines XD but i do like your work so keep IT up)

TheInfectedFilms This was some really good shit.It has potential.Anyways,it's good to see another video from one of my favorite SFM'mers.

TheInfectedFilms... Also if you do more can you add a demoman with the scotich resistence a green bandana and a like protector suit That would be awsome to see (srry prbly spelled everything wrong XD)

MORE EXPLOSIONS!

Dude!!! You did it again!! Congrats.

ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-_3V-jwHpDYg.html

Battlefield Reference.

+Savage more like infinite warfare

no its optimus pootis vs maggottron

I’m so happy I’m not the only one who found that part funny. XD

Yeah

Autoreds Vs Deceptiblus

4:34

+ golden

Battlefield reference

Yeah

Reaper meme lol

I got triggered.

French fireworks

Salvage you dont know how much i hate france right now

yummy baguettes

3:00

lol

I totally agree!

BSU3000 yes yes

BSU3000, you said it bro

BSU3000 e

Must be called "Scottish Shot"

This I my favorite moment of the video

Epico video man I subscribe and like

TheInfectedFilms Dear infected, This is probably one of my favorable sfm makes EVER! Nice work!

TheInfectedFilms will you make it longer than your average 2 part series

:D

TheInfectedFilms I would really like too see more of this

*bam*

Oh wait XD. You already said that.

You have excellent timing: barring any unforeseen problems, the third episode will be out next Friday - and personally I think it's the best one so far.

Skyriad give me one RU-vid channel that you don't comment in cuz I see you everywhere :/

ye :D

Ewan Creskeyallan I was gonna comment the same thing XD

Sure, always looking for detailed feedback.

Alright, so at 0:10 camera angle looks a bit dull, maybe try to move cam a bit to up-right to apply the rule of thirds. (you can google it) The camera spin is unnecessary and panning down would work a lot better, plus try to add a bit of ease out when the camera is about to stop panning. Also, try to tweak your render settings, the video looks really pixelly. After the spy pops up his head, (0:16) if you add a downward motion to it (head moves up, then down a bit) [check the 12 principles of animation for further reading]) it would feel more natural. (0:21) Again, your framing looks dull. Maybe if you reconstructed the scene as Medic looking from the base to enemies and then turning to Soldier and saying "Ohh this is not good!" it'd feel more effective. Plus no movement plus only talking is a no-no. There is a rule in films, characters should always do something when talking. That doesn't mean they should only do big movements. Small movements count too, like just displaying emotions with their face. But just standing stiff and talking doesn't make it natural. (0:30) Again, your characters lack emotion. (0:27) Maybe change your lens? look at Sniper and Demo's face. (0:47) If you don't know how to make walking cycles you should learn it. This is like the first thing animators learn when they're learning animations. But if you do, that's ok. (1:06) I don't know how you could improve this, seeing that the legs are moving the opposite direction, just looks weird. But maybe you could hide his left side so it'd look more cartoony. (1:10) Google "sneaky walk cycle" for ideas. The tip-toeing looks weird. (1:17) If you're not confident in your animation skills, I'd say don't cut from the movement you couldn't do. Try to learn it. That's how you improve, also observe real movement so you can copy it. *I will continuing my criticism on my next comment*

(1:27) I liked the camera shake there. Also maybe around (0:25) if the camera was behind his shoulder, the shot would look better. (1:33) Adding downwards movement after Pyro pops his head up would make it more natural. (1:36) A lot of negative space around characters, also how is the scout laughing like that? Not mandatory, but maybe tweaking some sounds' L and R channels would be better. Like when Scout says "Oh man" while it's cut to Engis. (1:49) Showing him running would make that better. (2:07) I think the Duck's sound echoing is a bit too much exaggeration, even for a cartoony style. Maybe you could add a plot twist/gag by making the Duck being alive and screaming when Pyro steps on it (2:15) I liked the eyes and the stone roll effect. But maybe you could make his eyes pop, when the duck sound is heard. Would add more emotion to it, and would be funnier. (2:25) Giving asymmetry to Engis' poses would make that shot better. Also who would shake in a situation like that like the Engis do? (2:35) Maybe, make a dispenser fall from the sky? Y'kno emphasis on the parts being there. (2:50) Making the hands shaky would be easy. And make the fight more believable. (2:55) I'm pretty sure nobody would stand still when launched through a rocket to the sky. (3:08) Um, don't just frame the hand. Show what happened. (3:10) Really liked the joke. But maybe if you made the head go down in a cartoony style, it'd be better. Btw liking the camera shakes. *more criticism on the next comment*

ahh, what the hell my last comment didn't get posted. I'm gonna go to sleep now so I can't bother to rewrite all that. Just add me on steam if you want more criticism. My steam is steamcommunity.com/id/cynaggot/

Your last comment did, but it wasn't posted here, instead, all the way down in the comment section. Here is it: --- (3:30) Movement looks unnatural. Also, some lighting would help. (3:56) Again, unnatural poses. (4:10) We don't really see the scout pushing, but making him a pushing pose would be much better. (4:17) Making characters talk and do nothing is boring. (4:22) Good visual gag, but at (4:26), when he's rolling he just stays stiff. (4:31) Maybe add some lighting effects, when the things explode? (4:36) Good visual gag again. (4:56) Wouldn't sniper just shoot him? Well, it's just weird, maybe making him appear and then instantly you show Pyro swinging his pan and then cut to Medic and cue the pan SFX. (5:09) I find this joke unfunny. And seems a bit pointless. Maybe with a better buildup it'd work. (5:20) Camera shake would really help here. (5:30) Liked the joke. I hope you learnt something. If you want more criticism you can add me Steam. My link is steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198121590248/ ---