0:11 the thighs seem to be awkwardly held in the air from this perspective. They should lie on the floor and only the lower parts of the leg should bend. The torso and the thighs should follow about the same line, here you have a sharp bend. Also, I'd personally replace the scenes at the end with only text with scenes that have actual characters. People are more interesting to look at than letters. That'd make the video more rewatchable. Still, it's very cool how you tried to remake the original video, my respect.
