Nothing ruins a good home video like a disembodied voice behind the camera. Might be fine for a home video but is makes for a substandard Commercial film product. It's creepy. Do one or the other. Either film or coach. If you are going to coach, Have someone else do the camera. Please. This is unwatchable unless I turn the volume off. ... Pity.
It's a shame you're incapable of deciphering that the voice coaching, is coaching the other girl, not ours. Just a voice in the crowd. Also, it's not a commercial film product, but I wouldn't expect someone that can't figure out who's who in a video to figure that out. Overall your commentary lacks insight or substance. Your comments are fine for a Facebook post, but for a commercial platform such as this, it's creepy. Either enjoy the video or become a real credentialed film critic, do one or the other. Your comment becomes unviewable once I turn my brightness off, pity.