When the story referenced Talon's mandibles, well, aren't mandibles associated with insects, such as ants? If they are referring to her jawbones, then why not call them jawbones?
how come all these alien planets have breathable air???? And have alien flora with phosphorescent leaves and wild animals all with sharp talons and humans to save the alien who all speak English ????????????????????????????????????
I stopped as I've already had 2 instances of repetition and I imagine many more would follow. Just something with these repeating parts of stories on every channel. The repetitions are called out in people's comments but nothing is done about it. For me I'm not interested.
Three most annoying words repeated over and over "hung in the balance" repeated over and over in this and other stories. this and every time it's repeated earns a thumbs down.
These fantasies never get enough of junk drama, because their foundations are morally dishonest and lack any reference to the Creator and His salvation.
