[AMV] Black Lagoon (Revy) - Shotgun Senorita 

Insane

good bro XD

I think this one is okay. When using songs like this one you have to keep in mind that the music has to dictate the visuals: - during the build up, start slow (panning shots, character posing, etc.) and increase the energy from there (characters getting ready to kick ass, moving quickly but without conflict. etc). During yours, you show characters firing at each other and the torpedo scene, these are too high energy for this. You could use the torpedo scene, but you'd have to let the chopper exploding coincide with the drop. - during the drop: go all out till the refrain has ended, no holds barred whatsoever. The first bit of this you did very well, with explosion timings and everything, but then starting at 0:50, you have a slow panning shot. Why? If you don't want to show characters fight here, show the scene where Roberta is chasing the car or something. The rest of the refrain also contains too many stills. - during the transition after the refrain, let the energy calm down a bit: Less shooting, more chasing, more people preparing for shoot outs, etc. overall I'd say this has some solid potential! Hope you can take this as the constructive criticism it's supposed to be. Hope to see more from you soon