Sounds great!! I would say to try and not over do this solo and keep it simple and musical. The extra grace notes may be a little much. Other than that the phrasing is amazing and the sound is perfect.
Thank you for watching and for your kind comment. In order to understand the style of this solo, I warmly recommend to have a read through the story and listen to some of the greatest recordings(such as the Levine one with CSO) and you will pheraps change idea. However, I respect your idea. Hope this helps, all the best 😊