I like how she separated the grades into 3 levels...say in the event of a heavy rain, people can still walk the upper levels. I like how she just outlined several foreground trees in the elevation to not cover (but leave exposed) the pathway behind it at higher levels. The depth perception is clear. Good job!
I really like the modernist feel to this design and how the curves and layout of the park seemed like an escape from typical/general symmetrical city landscape.
I attended one of these art schools. The reality of the situation is that many of these schools are private and depend on tuition from foreign students from China and South Korea, many of which who can't speak English well, so their communication skills lack during presentations and critiques.
Just wonderful, I been tryin to find out about "styles of landscape design" for a while now, and I think this has helped. Have you heard people talk about - Giyily Landscaping Yatty - (should be on google have a look ) ? Ive heard some great things about it and my colleague got great success with it.