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Комментарии : 53   
@rdb9912
@rdb9912 Месяц назад
Vortis loves slamming his fist against the bulkhead huh.
@garysuarez9614
@garysuarez9614 Месяц назад
And faces be contorted with eyes blazing.
@marysmith-ps7uj
@marysmith-ps7uj Месяц назад
And the ships "bristling with weapons" crap! Someone write better scripts and let an actual human read them. Geesh!!😮
@timblack6422
@timblack6422 Месяц назад
Why does this feel AI generated? Disjointed quite a bit.. some elements didn’t make sense with what was stated earlier in the story
@holarndius
@holarndius Месяц назад
It is AI generated, using a series of "Prompts" to guide the generation.
@drakkonis1
@drakkonis1 Месяц назад
@@holarndius Yeah. I've listened to a few of these stories from this channel and had to wonder about that. So much repetition in so many of them, for instance. The same paragraphs written over and over again in slightly different ways. Huge, gaping plot holes, scenarios requiring plot armor thick enough to ward off a supernova. I hate being critical, but if this is actually a human author, he or she needs the criticism so they can improve.
@ianmccardle330
@ianmccardle330 Месяц назад
I was initially excited and listened to a few of these. But the phrases constantly repeat that drives me nuts. Problem is hfy is everywhere and I cannot find sites that are alternative. I certainly shows the massive limitation . I have listened t a few extremely good stories but completely different narration. No repetition and great stories. Perhaps the people doing this are trying to do something good. Kudos. But it's not good
@drakkonis1
@drakkonis1 Месяц назад
@@ianmccardle330 Try stories from Agro Squirrel Narratives.
@vanguard9067
@vanguard9067 Месяц назад
@@ianmccardle330I listen for “beacon of hope”, “testament to human…”, and “indomitable will” as clear evidence of AI generation. AI seems to love those phrases:-)
@ericcastillo4026
@ericcastillo4026 Месяц назад
So at the start of the story the ship was waking up and powering weapons and shields, but then engineering was suppose to "bring back weapons and shields" so which is it? And what does an obsolescent ship from a race that was defeated would have that the advance species that defeated them would want? This story makes no sense at all.
@Anarxur
@Anarxur 14 дней назад
So Petrov is told to stay on the ship. Then Petrov dies in combat because he was not on the ship. Then Petrov is back aboard the ship having escaped the self destruct. Wut
@digger66a
@digger66a Месяц назад
When Aliens develop a Planet destroying Weapon its called Doomsday Device. Ehen Humans do the same its just called a necessary development.
@kingolegos
@kingolegos Месяц назад
Of course! We have to teach the Xeno-scum to know their place.
@Perurikun
@Perurikun Месяц назад
"The engines burned with a fierce determination" 🤣🤣🤣 does that mean the engines are alive? 😆
@kingolegos
@kingolegos Месяц назад
How did the alien guy figure out about the hidden human colony anyway?
@Perurikun
@Perurikun Месяц назад
you beat me to it! 🤣
@duotone69
@duotone69 Месяц назад
Cause the villain always tells their plans.
@cab8866
@cab8866 Месяц назад
Try keep text with audio.
@TheCardolan
@TheCardolan 9 дней назад
what happened to the boarding parties? The retribution had numerous boarders on it when the humans awoke from cryosleep. Those never got dealt with and spent the entire story on board doing something?
@FictionFrontiers
@FictionFrontiers Месяц назад
Tech eons ahead awakens sleeping titan. Our species' daring knows no limits!
@jamespseaman4136
@jamespseaman4136 Месяц назад
There’s always got to be Supersoldiers!
@craigsawicky1643
@craigsawicky1643 Месяц назад
Little boys play at Mine's Bigger. As soon as the Enemy made a statement concerning one's Death, the response should have been "Fire!". From that point the Battle escalates or ends.
@kconnor4568
@kconnor4568 Месяц назад
Ok I give up. What the hell is 88 supposed to be for?. Why have several commentators just put 88 on ?
@TheNilsolov
@TheNilsolov 12 дней назад
88 is a telgraph short for Love and Kisses. 99 is the opposit.
@marysmith-ps7uj
@marysmith-ps7uj Месяц назад
Too bad they don't have black alert and simply disappear. That wwould scare the hell out of the norcadians.
@leewilliamson3424
@leewilliamson3424 Месяц назад
In a galaxy far far away 🥷🤺
@michaelburke750
@michaelburke750 28 дней назад
…echoing through the void of space… WTH? No… just no.
@ChadLetourneaurhavoc
@ChadLetourneaurhavoc Месяц назад
wait a sec Petrov was left on the ship wjile the Cap did the RnD mission how did petrov end up on the mission
@darkcloudrider359
@darkcloudrider359 Месяц назад
Where can I get that picture for a desktop?
@Perurikun
@Perurikun Месяц назад
💯
@MrBobby6343
@MrBobby6343 Месяц назад
88 this is so entertaining
@ronaldwildman7296
@ronaldwildman7296 Месяц назад
The wording is off from the person or AI generated script. Blessings
@duotone69
@duotone69 Месяц назад
How big is Vortis’s wrist?
@TexasWpodApe
@TexasWpodApe 9 дней назад
I am 667 like and 88.
@lynneclark5313
@lynneclark5313 20 дней назад
Why did they have to mix up the end? 88
@caryking5382
@caryking5382 Месяц назад
All over the place. I tried to listen, but it's soooo bad.
@paulacornelison243
@paulacornelison243 Месяц назад
I only listened at it. I was busy doing other things. Worked great for me. Anything missed was because I wasn't listening.
@caryking5382
@caryking5382 Месяц назад
Let's start with the first 10min. How is it possible...... story starts with the ship being hit with boarding pods. Why you ask? They're being boarded. They ignored it and somehow escaped being surrounded by an entire enemy fleet to then capture a enemy scout ship, that happens to be too close to a hidden human outpost, that happens to to be close enough for them to enacted said capture. Then to begin interrogation of the scout ship's crew, while not addressing the situation with the multiple enemy boarding parties still on his ship. BTW, they just woke up and recovering from long term cryo sleep... First 10min of a "All over the place" story that had nearly 50min left in it. You must have been really busy.
@kconnor4568
@kconnor4568 Месяц назад
This story is full of lies, falsehoods ,repeating scenes, and plots that after the story was told and everything was over, then you start a different scenario where key characters die and previously dead characters are brought back to life. I stopped really paying attention to this not even 10 minutes into the video. Well, I guess this is one hour of my life that I will never get back.
@lairbear3611
@lairbear3611 Месяц назад
Omfg bro. Half of this story was just rewriting the same line in different ways to pad the story. Like in HS when you would fluff the words of a report by saying "there were many settlers in this area. The amount of settlers was vast but more arrived yearly. Over the years many new people continued to settle the area". OKAY BRO WE FKING GET IT! Besides that my man must have forgotten plot points cause i swear to god he would retcon what he had alread written without giving 2 fks if it held continuity. Horrible story. Good idea with potential, horrible execution.
@Rick-lb8sm
@Rick-lb8sm 14 дней назад
He also needs to learn the meaning of the word fate
@PoppaWoodiE
@PoppaWoodiE Месяц назад
Entertaining story but whoever is doing the captions is semi literate at best.
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