Love the intro and melody. Your work is fantastic and I'll be picking up a copy for Christmas My only thought is that pride is only referred by God as a sin, so I get the sentiment, but by nature as God, he couldn't give up something he didn't have. He gave up power and glory and position.
The word “pride” can also mean “one’s own dignity or position”, which would fit here, as we see in the book of Philippians: Php 2:6 Who, BEING IN THE FORM OF GOD (emphasis mine) in the form of God, thought it not robbery to be EQUAL WITH GOD: Php 2:7 But made himself of no reputation, and took upon him the form of a servant, and was made in the likeness of men: