I think it is better if a review of a game has in game footage of it being played so the person watching the review can relate to what you are saying while it is being played
I came across a review that is an ok example of an ok review. :) Not to insult your review :) To each their own I say :) CGR Undertow - AREA 51 for PlayStation 2 Video Game Review Also a RU-vidr that makes really really professional game reviews is called AngryJoeShow you may want to watch what they have done. Nice looking game collection you have there. Looks Fun.
Thanks for the feedback! For personal reasons and the objective of my content I do not do that, though I appreciate and recognize where you are coming from