Baka Densetsu: Legend of the POWER DUNK 

Ayyyy, your boy got into Elite Smash! Congrats for that. It's been a while since I've seen some Smash content, they should really introduce a better online system. You could really see how heavy the movement was during the matches, which is not a good thing for a fast paced platform-fighter like Ultimate.. Feedback, huh... Well, you're nice and easy to listen to, so you got that front covered. KoS is a good "inspiration" by himself, but his editing style does not work well with full games IMO, so you could either only show the highlights/funny moments similar to his montages, or mix his style with other editing styles that fit more with what you want to create. The first option would also help with segments that are not interesting or where your commentary is lacking, but I don't want to push you into that direction if it's not what you're looking for. Shorter videos are easier to consume, but then you'd just be one of the masses. Anyway, those are my initial thoughts after watching. Hope you can find something worthwhile