"Not very good"? This is fantastic! And I haven't seen a really good one that's nearly 4 minutes long, that's longer than a Sparta Pulse V7 Mix or a Sparta Jyro Mix. Very impressive indeed.
Amazing!!! I guess imo all you have to do it work out some of the pitch, and focus on any of the things that bother you... maybe audio balance a bit more. Then this would be PERFECT
I didn't know that you are capable to make such remixes like this one. :O And also i would recommend you to use Chorus, Reverb and other fx sounds effecs from sony vegas. :)