Much improved! It would be nice to see the trunk with cleaned bark and maybe some more shari, but perhaps you're waiting to see if it dies back a bit first?
Yeah, as I mentioned, I expect part of the lifeline to die due to the large branch I killed. Once it has a year to establish then I can follow the edges to create a natural shari. TBH I'm split on cleaning bark - I think it reduces the rugged feeling a tree can have. (I might be biased since I don't see the color red very well.)
Yeah, in retrospect that's not great music, but what the hey. It's actually a huge problem for YTer's - cant please everyone and can't use music in many cases due to copyright....so we have to rely on free music.