You know, this sounds a lot like Ballahoo Manor, only much more horrific. Way to bring in the bloody axe! Just think how Spencer would've reacted if he had seen the ghosts for himself... Oh, dear Lord, the bloopers at the end! 😆
I am dare to say that this is even worst than the case of "Ballohoo Manor" where only two persons died. While Boxford Loop Incident wasn't an incident but a massacre. It really sent me chills when I heard Edward's Story, feelin' even bad for thoses who perish in such massacre Besides from that, you did an amazing job!
Well, two people that we know of. It is mentioned that engines who took trains to the manor often saw terrible things, and that one such case was where the soldier killed a nurse and himself.
Well, both had already been written and were pretty far into production… I didn’t actually make this entire thing start to finish in 3 days, I’m not that fast 😂
@@paramount3603 once a story has been adapted so many times, there’s nothing new you can bring to it. I try to avoid super popular stories and instead focus on more unique ideas.
This feels like a Great Waterton retell of Horror at Ballahoo Manor. The screams of a woman running from a mentally deranged man that kills her. It gets your head spinning. It could almost be a sequel to Mike’s story (theburiedtruck) The Tender. All the more reason to love it.🎃👹
Maintenance Trains be like Victor Tanzig: Boring Carson08022: I sleep Rhen Prod: BIG RESPONSIBILITY Jokes aside, this was a pretty good story! Looking forward to more.
This is a great story. I see you got inspiration from Shunter Productions' Ballohoo Manor. But made it your own. I like the narration done by 84F Studios. He did a wonderful job here on narrating here. Overall a great story for Halloween. Well done here. Have a Happy Halloween!
Now it explain why in Hero of the Rails the Duke and Duchess wanted a new summer house,they left there old summer house alone,leaving the souls that died on that night to continue to repet there fait over and over.
I love to see stories featuring Nevil, mostly because he has such a unique design and was so underutilized. I love how you gave a backstory to the Boxford estate, even though it is dark. But I do have one nit-pick, not about the story. the Boxford junction branches of to the left, not the right. you can see this in Edward the Great.
This is one of the best ghost stories from the TTTE community and the first one to feature ax murders! And I'm impressed that you chose such a bold backstory for your first ghost story! This story and 10 O'Claw are the best ghost stories that I've watched this year. I'm excited to see more of your content.
dang, that was a very spooky story i've listen to for halloween this year from sudrian stories of hell, this was also a great inspiration on one of DGB12's stories of Ballahoo Manor, which that is also very cool as a reference. anyway's nice job on your Sudrian Stories From Hell for halloween 2022 dude, and Happy Halloween. 🎃
The artwork is great - the sunset and fog effects in particular. And it was good to see a Robinson 'Immingham' class engine in the early Sodor days. Must admit though, the story is much darker than any other Sodor story I've seen.
I think this one is the best out of the series So far. It's got Balahoo Manor energy, but with some interesting takes ad liberties to set it apart! NGL the Screams really got me lmao. Great work man! Absolutely love the content that this fandom brings at this time of year! and yours is at the top of the list!!
I love the fact that you left that little script blooper in at the end of the video for those that watch past the end credits for a final jumpscare or something. It was hilarious. XD
That was shocking when I saw this story, but it was brilliant. To be honest, you should have had Boxford's Duke and Duchess contact the Sodor Ghost Hunters, who along with psychic mediums and a priest, to investigate, on film using night-vision cameras, EVPs, and thermostats, to investigate the Boxford Mansion and then perform a path-crossing ritual to let the victim ghosts move on and then release the good within the killer and then have him move on ending the haunting permanently. Then Boxford Mansion will be in use once more. If could release "Boxford Loop (alternative ending) || Sudrian Stories From Hell #4" with this very paranormal investigation and path-crossing ritual, that would be great.
What they should have done is that after the boxford’s sold the mansion They should have ripped up the track connecting the loop with the main line to make sure it stays untouched for the rest of time
Geez, this reminds me of the Villisca axe murders. I don't think ANYONE would wanna purchase that house, now that it was the scene of a grisly massacre. Why would that axe-wielding maniac do such a thing? Was he mentally unstable or did he have a grudge against the homeowners?!
Your guess is as good as mine William My guess is that he was mentally unstable But I do agree with you. Why would anyone want to be the owner of a house that had a number of people murdered?!
Because he's the oldest mainline engine in service. When you've been around for 120 or so years, you're bound to seen a whole lot of shit over the decades.
Sodor may as well be the word Capital in terms of supernatural events. Neville at the center of a story was nice. He doesn't get a lot of spotlight, it's a nice change when he does.
If we are to assume the engine that used to pull trains there was Afton… wild idea here but maybe HE may have more insight into who that man was and his twisted motives… one doesn’t start cutting apart people with an axe for no reason after all..
It’s great story with Neville. I mean of course you took some Inspiration from Shunter Productions. But that’s totally fine. This fandom exists to inspire people. Nice work!
I really enjoyed the setup and the building tension in this story, but... And this might just be me: does anyone else feel like it's kinda hard to sell the human models as being scary? Idk, I don't see people ever having issues with it but I feel like the show played to its strengths when they used the human models for gags and rarely used them for spooks. Old Bailey's silhouette is the one exception that comes to mind, which subdued the somewhat goofy look of models in the series. Might just be me. But overall I still enjoyed a lot of the story. Recontextualizing the Boxford Loop into a creepy disused line worked perfectly. My favorite part though was the remark that Neville considered going on strike, really nice way to beef up his character with some personality.
Awesome story. The only thing I noticed (and this isn’t a critique of you specifically, more or less T&F ghost stories as a whole) it feels like it’s always Edward telling the backstories. I get it though, he’s old enough to have known what happened but its beginning to feel a little, overused? Idk besides that, still a great story and nice usage of Neville.
Hmm, it's a shame the ghosts weren't given a way to find peace. They'll just keep repeating that night like they have for years, and will do so for eternity.
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@@jamesthomas5109Although I'm aware that the flashback is black and white, that engine's livery doesn't look like it has LNWR on it. Almost as if he's wearing a British Railways livery.
This Story is very interesting i wanted to know what was the purpose for that man to committed a massacre crime for his actions was it because of the business that he was his poor and broke? Or was it because of that he saw many rich people but fot him he doesn't? Theres a lot of them to make theories on why the Boxford loop was having some supernatural encounters. The theory: for this Axe 🪓 man he was sick and tired of his struggle life being a job he wasn't taken care off he even have a rough life as a child grown to adult than he saw tons of rich people having there best life of there own that made him mad and rage took over him that night he carried a axe went to the Boxford Mansion and kill the party guest one by one till he took his own life but of this world he was living.
