Clarity and Focus: How to write clearly 

Hi, I am Ludwig from Semarang State University. Thankyou for the awesome explanation of clarity and focus. Now I can write clearly and good sentences because focuses on the chosen theme.

Thank you for give me information about how improving the clarity! This video is amazing. (Hani Nahdiati, from Semarang State University)

the example given helps me to understand better how to write a clear sentences. Thank you. (Essie, UNNES)

Hello, my name is Ria Aldila Putri from Unnes. This video, I believe, has aided my comprehension of how to compose strong sentences so that the writing is clearer and more focused on the selected subject. That's helpful since the example texts assist me grasp the content offered.

The explanation and examples is very easy to understand, thank you (Mahera, UNNES)

Hi, I’m Gayatri from UNNES. I think this video really helped me in understanding how to write a good sentences so that the writing becomes clearer and focuses on the chosen theme. That's good since there are some example texts, it helps me to understand the material presented.

This video is very useful for me. It makes me aware of things to create a good sentence and paragraph. Thank you for the clear explanation and examples. (Ailanisa Fistiari, UNNES).

I learned so much from this video because we are writing for others as well so they must be understand our writing, too. This video explained the challenges and the issues in academic writing. (Annisa Maharani, unnes)

Hi, my name is Mohamad Ahsanul Ihsan from UNNES. Thanks for making this video. We will all be confused if we read writing that is not clear on its purpose. Therefore, we must not make our readers feel that way.

After wacthing this video make me know how to write good sentence in writing. Thank you

This is a great video! I became more concerned about how to make sentences and paragraphs. Very detailed explanation, thank you! (Antesa Cellindho F, UNNES)

me who is writing a paper is very helpful after watching this video. So I know how to write a better sentences. Thanks for a great explanation! (Anastasya Regina A, UNNES)

In writing, I am often distracted, which causes my essays sometimes deviate too far from the theme I have chosen so that my meaning is not conveyed to the reader. and thanks to this video I realized that I'm not creating flow in my paragraph. (Ipung, UNNES)

From this video, I can comprehend from it on how to make my writing clear and focus on the theme. However, I think the explanation needs to be more detailed and may be longer since this topic is crucial for students like me. Thanks! (Adila Afiatina, UNNES)

I am very sorry. But this video was not so clear for me 😞