Critique My Campaign | Episode 7 | Checking Out Crowdfunding Campaigns With Michael Oden 

This being another Saturday stream for you, another regular Saturday workday for me and then I let this replay fall by the wayside. Even though I especially appreciate the premise of this 'series' of yours, Dave. As I seem to have liked all of your attempted and ongoing livestream series. The Dutch Angle, Never Die!!! Personally: I'm interested in all of the visuals then text that the campaign page presents, first - any included trailer, after. Telepathic Bunny's Captain or whatever Ironsides I know first and only through the first Crossworlds commission piece with American Bliss that was coloured and posted online. David's/Hans' Red Eyes series always has excellent quality cover images, prints and collector box stills. Mister/Mr. Burger had great animation, seemed more effective at and suited to being an animation, made me think of the old Burger Time arcade game and also made me hungry. Wow, Wingless looks more impressive than expected. Its art is comparable to having been drawn by a major animation studio animator, yet it fits being on a page as stills. Disney-level, I guess I'm dragging myself to say. A Saga of Sunsets...seems as troubled or overambitious - obviously with that glaring 'flaw' of such a high funding goal - as any previous campaign that the founder of FMC seems tro be entangled with. Yes, the tier of visuals on that book appears to be on a level justifiable for such a large, requested sum of funds. But, still. That is amazing that that art is also by Luke Stone, since I was underwhelmed by his illustration for his previous IP I don't remember the name of, that was on FMC when the platform launched. Well-progressed. Oden's critiquing can go on to delve into complaining-lecturing and can get a bit annoying sometimes. But he brings up cogent points all the same. Besides that critiquing, good job on your comics critic duo show, Dave. Thanks for helping to point out another spread of books and providing some valuable advice. Both of ya! And I love that you've decided to expand Perfect 10 (its first volume?) from your original plan of 4 issues, to 6 issues. Have a great day!

Wingless creator here. Thank you for the kind words, friends. I agree about the long ending of the trailer. It was 100% for the soundtrack, lol

Luke Stone is doing the art for Saga Of Sunsets BTW