Not bad... but I have a few criticisms: 1) your build is too long- at a bit after 3:00 I was getting tired of waiting, 2) the pitch of Pete's voice is higher than it should be- just time-compress the vocals to match your BPM without raising the pitch, or if you want the sound of a record at high speed, do it so it sounds intentional, 3) yeah, we get it: you're amused by the word, "come". This is a fine example of production that is too proud of itself- try some humility when you approach this.
