Dear you, Your skin isn't paper, so don't cut it. Your life isn't a film, so don't end it. Your size isn't a book, so don't judge it. Your face isn't a mask, so don't hide it. Life is short, so don't make it shorter. Your head isn't a target, so please don't shoot it. Sincerely, someone who cares about you more than you could ever know, even if I don't know you in person. Edit: I come back to this video every so often. I forgot about this comment. My sister did that last one on November 22nd 2020 because she didn't realize how amazing she was, and I miss her so much. So I mean this even more than I did when I first wrote this comment when I say: Don't. Give. Up. It's not worth it. You are loved and cared for by more people than you think, including me. I don't know how she didn't see that. I'm not asking for pity or you to feel bad for me or anything, but if you could pray for my family or at least wish them well, that would make my day more than you could ever possibly know. It's November 22, 2021. Thought I'd come back to this for the occasion.
@unreasonably random I saw this comment a few days ago and prayed throughout the day. It was the day I was contemplating. (You know if you know) it helped me. But I prayed for your family all day. I hope you could feel God’s presence in that moment. Lots of love to you, your family, and your sister
@@k.k7208 also I'm glad my comment helped you through your struggles and it's so amazing that I was able to spread joy and love to someone who needed it
@@RatchelRach thank you so much for asking! i am doing much better as i have made my dance team and have good supportive friends at my side. ofc i still have moments but i’m over all so much better. again, i can’t thank you enough for this comment🥰 how are you feeling lately?
"Dear you, I feel the same way as you." That line right there was the one that really hit home with me. So many times do I have to tell myself that Im ok. This was beautiful and the way you moved to your own words was stunning. Well done
Dear Jordan, This is an absolutely beautiful piece of work, and something to be proud of. I also see in the comments that you’ve freely shared permission for many other dancers to use your poem for creating work as well. As a dancer myself, I know how emotional the process of creation is, and in addition to your obvious skills as a dancer and writer I commend your generosity of spirit. Thank you so much for sharing this, and all the best for your further work!
Dear Jordan!! This is so beautiful. I actually shed a tear near the end, you have such a gift to write poetry like this and dance to it. May I use this audio for a solo at my dance studio for next year? Your words are so inspiring and I would be honoured for you to let me use it, if so, would you like me to send you my email? Amazing and such an inspirational dance and poetry. 🩷❤️😊
Hi Jordan! I was wondering if I could get your permission to have your poem and song to dance to whenever I need to get my feelings out! Thank you for being so inspiring! ❤️
Hi Jordan, I Love this spoken word - found it so inspirational! I wondered if I could please use some of the audio for my dance team routine. Have emailed you too for permission X
This is one of my new favorite dances, I dont know if you will see this but is there anyway I could use this poem and song for my up coming season, it will be a different dance! But I love this ❤❤❤
Hey Jordan, I was just wondering if we could use this song for my solo this year? We have already started it at dance, but we can't add to much until you give us the ok.
Hello Jordan! This is absolutely beautiful. So inspiring! I was wondering if I may use your music for my dance team. It would be an honor to be able to dance to this. Sending Love!
Hi! I’m looking for some spoken poetry to dance to and i absolutely love this it’s beautiful and I was wondering if I could have some sort of Mp3 of it or some recording that I could use for a dance? If not I completely understand this is yours completely I just think that it’s so amazing and would love to use it myself😊
Hi, I was wondering if I could use this for my solo this year? I've been told that spoken word is a good challenge, and I feel like I'll be able to execute the dance better if I actually feel what the poem is about. This really, really speaks to me and I was wondering I could use it? If you don't want me to, I respect your decision :)
Dear you , will you please make a voice for me ? " There was once a girl so bright the sparkle in her eyes never dull she had everything she could have dreamed of her life wasn't perfect but with him as perfect as it gets he gave her hope that one day she would have her fairytale herself the princess and him the prince but not after long the prince turned into a toad he built the princess a castle of hope only to knock it all down he told her about this thing called love the princess unsure if it were real he taught her how to feel it but didn't stay to make it last the silly toad didn't know what he lost but the princess lost something that day the sparkle in her eye burned out and she was sure they'd never shine again for he was the reason they lit up."
hey jordan! my name is brianna duncan and i am also a dancer. i was looking for songs that really inspired me and something i can relate to and i fell in love with this one. i was wondering if i could do a competitive solo to this song??? i would really like youre permission to use it so pleaseee get back to me!
@@JordanCathryn omg really thank you sooooo much I love this. My uncle committed suicide 7 months ago and since then our family is going thru really hard times. I think this is exactly how I feel and if he would've he would still be here. Thank you sooo much
@@JordanCathryn Hello again so I was wondering if by any chance you have the original audio file? We tried using it from this video but it doesn't sound too good. Would you be willing to share it with me. I can purchase if you want
@@JordanCathryn hi Jordan pls respond to my last comment. I really need to start pls I follow back in a day or you can unfollow 😋 my solo soon and I can't picture myself dancing to anything else. It would mean so much to me to be able to dance to your awesome words. They really do inspire me. We just need to audio to sound better so that is why we need the original. Again we are willing to purchase it.
