As I already commented in the Deathbed gameplay showcase video you should add a part where only NMI will sing, for example after Kiddo death, and also, will there be dialogue in V2?
In the version catmania played in the second form, he kinds of repeats the move like in his up move he kinds of closes his mouth multiple times, But I think its better to be like the second teaser Grinch teased(I hope you understand lol)
i love this. i think you nearly perfected the pacing, there's catchy motifs, and especially at the end the combination of the shrill off-key piano, booming drums, heart rate monitor, and NMI's grisly chromatics all work together with the high-contrast grotesque art to have this tone of intimidation and fear that builds up and climaxes really well. genuinely fantastic job, i don't even care about EXE stuff and this is one of my favorite FNF songs now. i think it could be improved a little bit by slightly reducing the choppiness and sheer density of the vocals/charting at the end, and shortening the instrumental section before the crescendo (possibly just by adding a very slow and solemn vocal section over half of it to keep the player engaged) but overall this is excellent
Genuinely one of the best songs to come out this year. To preface this, Ive never listened to any other stuff on your channel, my interest in FNF has declined 99% in the past year, and I barely listen to videogame music in my spare time. The production on this is amazing, the strings have a very unique style, that goes beyound what was ever seen in this community, even comparing to sturm. The piano and drums work so well toguether, making the song have various high and low intensity moments. The emotion of dread, of something being deeply wrong, the intense rise of horror, and the last nostalgic moments of this song elevate so much the ambience of this piece. Truly amazing work. Dont give up
@@ivoneo2806 my Spotify playlist is over 700 songs of hip hop, indie and jazz, I'd say I listen to my far share of "normal" music. I only listen to fnf music in gym nowadays.
My only downside to the song's instrumental is how echo-y it can get. Making it echo-y IS great for atmosphere, but it's a bit much and takes it down a bit for me.
I disagree, honestly. Even if it's not technically the best option, I'd say thematically and aesthetically it is. Given you're playing as someone literally fading in and out of consciousness in a hospital bed, the audio being so distant and strange sounding only adds to the song, imo.
@@retroblade8818 Nothing a little tightening up and re-balancing can't fix, I'm sure. I just think care should be taken to preserve the ambience in the process.
Assuming there will be a v2 version of this song, I honestly do enjoy this song a lot, but I wish there less “notes” overall, but still keeping the intensity of the songs. The chromatics are SUPERB, but I dislike the choppiness of the vocals that occur due to the abundance of notes throughout the song, it works in some areas but some others not so much, and it also lead to a lack of any distinct melody I can cling onto or recall back on, I can only really remember the first two minutes of the song perfectly while the rest kinda just blends in together. One part that’s fast and intense that I don’t mind not getting changed much, is actually the section that starts at 4:07 after the “no vocal” section, it’s works really well but it doesn’t stand out due to the already abundant notes in the rest of the song. Still a great ending tho, I love this song to death despite all the gripes and I hope it only gets better(if I’m not gaslighting myself about a v2 of this song)
@@joechristo2I’m aware of that, there are a lot of songs I enjoy that have about the same amount of notes or even more, it’s just with this song specifically, that wasn’t the direction I was really hoping for but at least there could’ve been a hook or more distinct melodies rather than just for intensity’s/difficulty’s sake yknow?
There's something oddly mesmerizing about the first minute about the song. In like, a good way. Maybe it's the way it's just all slow and somber sounding with the monitor's beeping. Nevertheless, you made something incredible, and I'm excited to see what touch-ups you make for the V2 of this song!
This will def and has already gone down as one of my favorite fnf songs of all time, and i hope it's like that for everyone else. I cannot overstate how good this song is. I just wish the drums/percussion was a liiittle more intense or bass-y and louder for that real primal sense of pure terror
idk what everyone else is yapping about i really like this song, only thing in v2 i’d like to see is at the end where the dude you’re playing as is dying, it does another slow part like the beginning, like a struggle to hold on or smth, maybe repeating the first couple of turns or something, or maybe erratic, spaced out hold notes
If I were to suggest something to have to fill in the instrumental section in the middle, I'd actually suggest a short, limited, storyboard-esque animation. Slow panning shots with the deep blacks shaking slightly--sorta like in Fakebaby from Hit Single--showing the child has flatlined and NMI's reaction, ending with something to show that he's literally bringing them back from brink of death for one last round of pain.
God the first minute of this song is genuinely perfect. This song has my favorite first minute out of every FNF song ever. I love the feeling of melancholy behind it and how it somehow sounds calm but yet also has a hint of it being sinister. The rest of the song is really good but I don't think it hit the same highs the first minute of this song did for me. If I have any suggestions for V2 it's that you somehow make more of the song like the first minute of this song (hopefully it makes sense what I'm trying to say, I'm not a musician so I'm not the best at trying to express constructive criticism). Also I would suggest trimming down the sections of the song that aren't filled with vocals especially after 5 minutes in, I think around a minute of basically ambience is too much even for a song like this
Deathbed lyrics: (for NMI) (Verse 1) Do not fret, young one I mean no harm I have come to see you Your Gaurdian angel I’m here to give you a peaceful rest. I have helped others like you put trust in me Let me help you drift away. (Verse 2) Now your choice has come and gone Oh child why do you still fight just shut your eyes Let the darkness shroud. Life long passed all from the once happy innocents It’s all just a fleeting memory Let me lead you to the *DARK* Do you think your family cares? They left you to rot away. Left you to die on your own *DEATHBED* Why not come with me you’ll have much more glee with the prizes I offer you Chance at something new something that they cannot give you. Yet you know I’m good they treated you like a parasite. If they truly loved you then why aren’t they here? Just accept your fate it’s far too late for you Here on your DEATHBED is where you will stay For I am here to take you home Yet you still persist Whats the point in this? Just close your eyes. You know they lied so why resist Just sleep into a dark dream And feel your life slip away No matter I tried to play nice but you forced my hand A boy with no hope left All alone Now faces his certain demise Let me show you the life you can live If you just take my hand Trust me it will not hurt that’s If you choose not to struggle. Yet You Fight. It seems you’ve chosen the hard way but remember I gave you a chance What’s wrong? Do you feel your heart throb in pain During your last day? Do you fear what’s on the other side If you want fear look into my eyes Is something wrong? Your face looks all wrong like you’ve seen the devil But you have only met his right hand man. I’ll show you the light just take the bite of the forbidden fruit. You can’t keep up your facade I can see your soul shake in fear This world has betrayed you so why do you still act like you care Now your ignorance has shown I’ve come to reap what you have sown (VERSE 3) I’m sorry but I’m not letting you go that easy If you’ve refused my offer And for that I’ll make sure you’ll suffer Even if it’s for a short time I’ll make sure you’ll spend it all in agony I tried to give a chance but your escapism has *FAILED YOU* And now your name will be in a distant memory where all traitors will be BANISHED It seems time coming to a close but know this young one *THERES NO GOD FOR YOU TO PRAY* The only one to pray to is me Given many chances now forever lost inside of Deaths dace. *IN THE END WE NEVER LOVED YOU* *YOU ARE JUST MERE VESSEL*
Well that’s cool, I respect wanting to improve stuff. All I suggest is keeping this version around too, since there’s been quite a few times that remade or updated FNF songs haven’t hit the same way as the original for some people (Incident and Infinite come to mind) so don’t nuke this off the face of the earth. Honestly tho, I’m just content vibing with this. Maybe others have constructive suggestions for V2, but I dunno.
Hmm I really like the instrument but the note overall at mid and at the end of the song doesn’t emotionally for much. I think maybe some high note for NMI or some lyric will do a great job. This instrument is already a banger so you really should keep it or change / remake just a bit 😅❤
That final section is absolutely beautiful, if it's not too much could I have the bpm and key for it? Seriously this section is so good I want to make a whole song based around it
Me gustaría que se notarán más los cambios de ritmo y que las notas tuvieran mas melodia, sobre todo en la mitad de la canción que se siente un poco repetitiva Además creo que le quedarian bien que en el climax de la canción se oyeran campanas y cuervos para indicar la muerte y modificar la voz de nmi, para que no sea opacada por la instrumental
I heard this song and it's so freaking wild, but my question is will there be a cutscene for deathbed when v1 releases? Like what person that is in the hospital bed and what caused it to be in the hospital?
DUDE I saw this in the first teaser and then i loved it SO MUCH, the piano feels mysterious, the music by it self make me remember of fight or flight. Are you gonna publish the FLP?
@@mshadreal8011not anymore, there are 4 new songs from garn that include other composers, as well as a scrapped song exclusively composed by Joey for the mod.
I was wandering around and i found this song I dont really care about nmi in fact i dont care about exe But i like the sturm nmi in sonic.exz 3.0 But in the final render of fakebaby im kinda sad about the song bcz there are some probleme (Like to much vocal) But i saw this song i fall in love bcz i touch my earth for a things than i will keep private But the song have some probleme i will tell (in my opinion) Vocal mixing like some time nmi a to much loud a the end But instrumal are prefect bu i will give some tips i learn for music school chinease. In chineas music they very love add flute or wind instruments so maybe add this for a main melodie in the apparition of nmi for give this song a oriental apparition. You can also add bells and taiko for add some punch a the end And secret tips a tremolo strings at the end for a very cool end Also if you can give this to coder For the start i have to idea. I know youre using CNE engine so pretty easy to modding and powerfull. At the start maybe reduce the creepy pose for make him more mystic like at the start make the alt pose like a imagination. And the pc live (idk how tell this in english) Maybe add a flx backdrop to make in like a real one because it look like a vizulasizer And for the artist is cooking to hot for him very banger at all my only request its make the animation return at the idle like massacre stages from MCM or all vs gorfield sprite or all yoshi sprite in mario madness Also have a very good luck and fun with this mod! (Sorry for my bad english im french)
