You use interesting combinations of characters, it's obvious you're having fun! I noticed some of your lines sound a bit unnatural. For instance, when the Berry Big circus cast goes to Très Bien, Regina talks about Regent and says "Regent, my tiger". Everyone around the table knows who Regent is, it perfectly fine to refer to the tiger by his name alone, especially with circus members being the only ones present n the scene. Trust the audience to know/guess who Regent is in case they have forgotten. The line where Regina mentions him she says he was playful, we can guess she is talking about the tiger. Here it is the opposite, Trilo seemed to have guessed that Ron is a thief, which is again super weird. How does he know that? If the characters haven't shared that info in the games, we the audience are going to assume that Trilo has never met Ron and has no idea he is MaskdeMasque. Maybe a line so Trilo says he recognised Ron as MaskdeMasque from a pic in the newspaper could be enough, but we kinda need to know how Trilo knows about Ron being a "thief". Either characters share info that they already know, or on the contrary know more than they should, it doesn't really fit. Once fixed, that will make the characters feel more real! Ron's gift idea was cute, his reaction to Désirée very in character lol
