This wasn't exactly what I thought it was going to be but I really love that intro from Tooth & Nail. Definitely a nice rendition and seemed pretty much right on. Nice to see how that got played up close. At the end you can see that it took a little bit of artistry to vary the notes to convey the emotion of the crescendo. Nice contribution to the Tube.
I can remember going to the Monsters of Rock Tour back in 1987 at Arrowhead Stadium in Kansas City, MO and Dokken was one of the groups there. When they were set to play, me and a friend of mine were down on the floor close to the stage and I heard the first notes of this as I watched George Lynch behind a stack of amplifiers playing this hidden from the sight of most the audience...
Not bad! You got the notes down, now you just need to concentrate on the execution - vibrato, attack, etc. It's VERY hard to sound like George so kudos to you. A good job.