I really like the scene where he bends over to pick up the paper. My suggestion is to have them both visible during the conversation with an over-the shoulder shot-reverse-shot. I always forget to do it that way and my actors look like they're "on stage". But great work. love the B/W grading. Are you using a LUT?
@@richardstirling5799 my biggest problem is low-light. I have a lot of night shots that are very very grainy. ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-qliChbhPAa4.htmlsi=eChKSNJa-ffYv6kc
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