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You fumbled it. You need to extend the beat drops by a considerable amount, one. Two, you also need to create a hook out of her singing. You also need to use her “ooooooo” part as you do it, & you need to use the “will you ever know” double up part too. When you do it, use the final parts of the hook when she’s singing it louder and more passionately. Those are the best parts of the song. You can catch the loud “you don’t know know my name & it feels like ooooooo. Will you ever know” parts of you do it right. Also, try to cause like a turntable effect on one of the parts of the “will you ever know” preferably on the hooks like….”scratch scratch scratch scratch will, will, will you ever know” or something dope like that. You could even enter the hooks like that just without the scratch noises from the turntable thingy. It was cool. I could make something dope out of it….but, it could be way better and so my official stance is that you fumbled it due to not using any of her singing to create a hook, not properly making use of her “ooooo” for a hook or bridge, not using the “will you ever know” double up she used at the end, etc. etc. it’s too plain and bland and boring of a beat. Also, for not extending the beat drops & being more clever with them. It should’ve been beat drop for at least 10 seconds longer then transition into the hook that’s also dropped & then verse again. It’s just beat beat beat the whole way through and that’s lowkey wack. This is coming from a fan who has made hits with your tracks, already. Stay safe and stay blessed. ❤
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