“Oh 1 hour video! Nice!” “I wonder why only original nightmare is there?” … “Ofc something is wrong with it. Sigh can’t have anything good these days Huh?.”
I have a few criticisms. 1, the loading is way too long. 2, during scenes like the part where Original Dream casts a positivity spell, the frames are too slow. 3, some screenshots with words are too fast for me to read, and I'm a pretty fast reader. 4, the characters' reactions aren't quite like what they'd be in canon. NONE OF THIS IS MEANT TO BE HATE!! This is only meant for CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, to help improve future videos! Thank you for reading this far, and with that, this comment is over. (Sorry if I'm awkward, I'm sort of new to commenting.)
I don't mind self shipping. Personally, I think it's cringe but you do you. But if the character is not interested in romantics, then make it an AU and change the character up a bit.
IM SORRY???? “Yes hunny”?!?!?!?! I WAS ABOUT TO COMMENT ABOUT HOW I LOVED THE FACT THE VIDEO IS LONG BUT WHY?!?!?!?!?!?! NO ONE and I MEAN NO one can make C!Nightmare do that??? AND YOU MADE HIM YOUR HUSBAND?????? WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY????????????
No hate, but I don't really like this video- It's 1 hour because of the unneeded long loading times in between meme's to just drag it out, and unneeded watching of the bad sanses meme's (unneeded is just my opinion tho). And the self insert shipping was the thing that made me unable to continue the rest of the video. Seeing someone use the pet name 'hun' to describe Nightmare, the local goopy guardian and pretty much embodiment of negativity is just extremely cringy to me. It's down to your choice on that one tho, since, well, it's your AU and representations of these chrs. I'm just not the biggest fan of it. I will say tho, to at least point out the positives, the designs are pretty good (I've never read anything proper about the DreamSwap lore but I feel the designs feel more based off of something rather than what I usually see) and the reactions I saw so far weren't half bad, I liked the small smile people gave at normal Dream when he popped into the room to cheer people up! I recon you've got potential with this stuff, just gotta give it a few years to grow up and gain a different perspective ^^" ((Idk, was I too analytical about some silly reaction video? Yes, do I care? Nah. I just wanted to give helpful feedback. Unless it isn't helpful, in which case, ignore me lol TvT"
Everyone else: *complaining about the self-inset like they havent imagined it once* Meanwhile I'm just confused why ds au gang are skeletons... Cause the creator of the universe made them humans so im just a little confused. Unless this is an au of that au?
Bad spelling, character designs are alright, reactions are pretty bland and boring questions. There's a lot of things that make the video less entertaining. Despite the long duration your video needed some work... Not hating by the way.
No hate to this lovely vid but if you ever plan to do a future reaction vid I don’t recommend blurring out the screen when it’s a long meme as some ppl prefer just enjoying the memes instead
I really love the designs, and how did you manage to make this 1 hour long?! I love it, keep the good work up. I don't mind if it's your own AU as this is gacha, we technically don't have to make everything like cannon
Oh yea I recommend to make some screenshots shorter, like when Killer was bowing and apologising or any other scenes. This is just an advice, you don't have to listen to me
Good video! Just maybe don't make the pauses that long. There were partly 40 second long pauses between the videos where just nothing happened- Still nice character design and reactions were good too. Keep the good work up!^^
honestly I can't look at it, you didn't read anything about the characters and their stories at all, but just took their design? it's horrible. you're right, but since I love dreamswap, I very upset. Sorry.
I personally agree whit the 99.9% people in the comment section, uneeded long screen shots, words appearing too fast...... And the god dam self shipping 💀
@@iris_the_Mf_be_vibing Hello, I’ve seen your comment and I just want to say while I appreciate your feedback on my video I will not tolerate on how you word it yes I did self shipping and you don’t like it but you need to understand this is my video and I’ll do whatever I want if you do not like it you don’t have to watch this it says on my channel that if you do not like you do not have to watch my videos and please refrain from posting any negative comments on my videos I do not tolerate this kind of negativity in my comments section I’m not trying to be mean here but I do not appreciate how negative you are
I love your character designs the thing that gets me is you keeping the texts just in the way but that's just my opinion but still it's lovely and keep it up and because I do this to everyone here's a cookie 🍪
Help someone inserted themselves into the Undertale fandom and shipped their oc with nightmare sans from dreamtale even though nightmares an black octopus that feeds off of negativity so he wouldnt date someone because it would give off positive energy.
Блин одновременно так хорошо но и нет ладн есть несколько минусов которые думаю автор исправит со временем )1- это долгие кадры боже делай движения персонажей быстрее пожалуйста очень медленно просто кажды урезай и все например когда киллер подходит к ДСнайтмеру то просто оооочень долго и особенно когда загружается видео немного быстрей и будет просто ❤ это самый выраженный минус который я нашла .А так если это исправишь можно сказать что реакция неплоха но есть куда расти ) и я не хотела обидеть автора своим высказыванием просто немного мешает просмотру
The loading is so unnecessary long.. like at one point 30 seconds of loading!? Like usually loading should be 5 sec max- we didn’t come here for a loading screen…
