You not only gave your own personal twist to the song, putting a lot of effort and personality to your version, but made it deeper by changing "mother" to "father" in the final verse. This is amazing and I'm really stunned, one of the best covers I've ever seen, hands down. Keep doing what you're doing this is really amazing!!!!
You have a gift for transtions and moments; you create whole little worlds inside tiny castles of phrasing. I feel like that's a sign of great musician.