I want to see part 2 also damn i fell bad for the bullies i mean they kinda deserve it except for edward that guy don't deserve to get beaten up he wasn't involved in that :)))
The voice acting is pretty decent and overall this comics is pretty good but it has problems Like this is the only storyline that actually makes sense how he found out he overheard them instead of "oh no someone tells him the truth" type story and this version of Engle is a a bit edgy but he does reflects from his action and understand what he has done was awful and I can't wait to see more of this
Part 2 Ms Grace:ENGEL! Engel:Crap Ms Grace THIS IS UNBELIEVABLE,YOUR ON OF OUR TOP STUDENTS! Ms Circle:I don’t really care about my Son Bc he’s not my son X3 Ms grace:Come with me Engel….. Engel:Ok… At her office Engel:I didn’t mean to… Ms grace:You know that Zip have’s an family,Chip is her little brother… Engel:Wait,I killed zip? Ms Grace:No,No!You just injury her,Your in grave danger Engel,You killed Oliver an Hurt Zip… Ms Thavel And Alice:ENGEL,WHAT THE F#CK?! Alice and Ms thavel injured Engel badly but he survived?!?! Engel:Zip am sorry… Zip:No…Am Sorry,I shouldn’t Join into the That Murder spree… Zip:But How you Survived? Engel:Idk…But I need answers. Edit:Engels injury’s are an loss eye,Broken Hand,Broken Rip-cage,And Loss of a leg. Part 3: _This is where Engel heal from th injury’s_ Zip:Should we follow that cat? Engel:He’s name is MoeMoe,I believe he went to that way. They follow MoeMoe Zip:Why is this so bright? Engel:Huh? Zip You Have Blonde hair… Zip:An you look like Elizabeth Afton. Engel:We Are Human… Fen Walk up to them Zip:?! Xister:Calm down,welcome to the forest. Engel:So You know Claire? Fen:…Yes…. Xister:We Her parents! Zip:Well,Alice Have killed hee.. Fen:….. Xister:You gotta be joking….Haha…. Engel:Follow us.. *At the School* Fen:CLAIRE! Zip hugged Xister as she cry in her arms Engel:Am sorry,but you can get your revenge. Fen:WHERE?! Zip pointed at Alice’s Room Fen Ran to that room Engel:I think we did it! Claire:Engel… Engel:..! Claire:Thank you so much for getting my revenge,MoeMoe’s Spirit was protecting you. Engel:?! Claire:Take care of MoeMoe,Can you? Engel:I promise Zip And Engel Become Friends and everything is perfect? Alice:EN53L M5RK M8 W0RD3 I W1L2 3ILL YOU! The End?
Imma make my version of this story cus yes TW: ●swears ●death ●horrible threats one would make towards a girl ●gore ●mid storytelling I guess Hope ya like it lol *cue the death of Claire.* *Engel wraps his arms around the top half of Claire's corpse in the form of a hug that he couldn't give, sobbing and blaming no one but himself for not being able to save her.* Engel: oh God... why couldn't I be there for her enough!? Why me!? *Engel continued sobbing onto her cold shoulder, like a toddler without his blanket. He cried as the others surrounding him mourned, but less than he did. Engel slowly let go of her mangled, irreversibly damaged corpse, tears still forming like a hurricane was stuck in his eyes. As he got up, wiping his tears with his hands stained in the blood of his lover, he looked around and saw nobody behind him. He was completely alone, both physically and mentally.* Engel: ... of course, I just had to be alone, huh? *Suddenly, he heard chuckles and laughter, and along with it, was the mention of Claire's name. He slowly crept behind the T-shaped hallway and looked around the corners. He looked and saw 2 people - people he had a special sense of hatred towards, being Oliver and Zip. Zip, still chuckling like a witch who made poison for the first time, boasted about her victorious kill that she got from a mere pencil and paper, and Oliver laughed along, boasting about his girlfriend being not-so-hungry now.* Zip: Haha! That was so damn hilarious! Oliver: heh- yeah, I know right? That lil egghead boy is crying cus his lil pookie wookie just left him! Ha! Zip: hehe, yeah. That's the power of my famous 2b pencil! Oliver: be glad my girl ate well. *As Engel eavesdropped on their conversation, albeit they were being a bit loud for it to be considered eavesdropping, he had a sudden realization click inside his head. He realized that Claire's death wasn't **_his_** fault, but **_theirs._* Pt2 will be added soon but the TW will be there for the future Edit: Pt2 *Engel looked at them and squinted his eyes with pure, unfiltered disdain. He always wanted to kill them out of the hate that he had, mainly because they would usually bully him and the other kids. Now, he has another reason; they killed his lover.* Engel: ... those damned sons and daughters of bitches... I should've killed them earlier. Well, better late than never, I guess. *he mumbled to himself and made a tight fist of rage. He made the fist so tight to the point of shivering. As he mumbled, he saw the pair part ways from the corner, and Engel gets a brutal idea in mind. He will brutally kill Oliver, but he has to do it somewhere far from Alice, otherwise his plan and act of vengeance would be in vain. Ever so silently, he crept behind Oliver and made sure that he's completely alone. His plan would've been to bring Oliver into an empty room, but until Oliver turned around and faced him, he decided to just go for the throat. The two stand in the halls, and as usual, Oliver would mock him.* Oliver: aw, is the lil egghead gonna cry cus his lil pookie bear died? Aw, boo hoo. *Oliver taunted, but Engel stayed silent, locking onto his eyes with a cold, dead stare, creeping Oliver out Before Oliver could do anything else, Engel suddenly grabbed onto his har and slammed his face into a nearby locker, breaking his nose.* Oliver: OW, WHAT THE FUCK!? AHH! SHIT! MY NOSE IS BLEEDING- WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT FOR- *Engel kept his mouth shut and slammed Oliver's face into the locker again before letting go of his head. Oliver stumbled back and fell on his rear, still holding onto his hurting, broken and bloodied nose. Engel picked Oliver up from the hair on his scalp very tightly in a way that hurts him and looks at him sternly.* Engel: YOU. YOU CAUSED THIS. YOU DIRTY PIECE OF SHIT. I HATE YOU. I WANT YOU DEAD, AND I WILL TELL YOU HOW I HATE YOU. YOU ARE A PATHETIC, JOBLESS 20 YEAR OLD WASTING YOUR LIFE AWAY IN THIS DAMNED CONCRETE JAILCELL CALLED A "SCHOOL". AND WHY? BECAUSE YOU EITHER WANT TO HOOK UP WITH ALICE OR BELITTLE EVERYONE, ESPECIALLY CLAIRE. YOU CAUSED THE DEATH OF MY FRIEND WHO MEANT SO MUCH TO ME. YOU TOOK HER AWAY. AND FOR THAT, I WILL FIX IT. I WILL FIX IT, BY UNVEILING YOUR VISCERA OUT OF YOUR HUSK OF A BODY LIKE YOUR WENCH DID WITH CLAIRE AS VENGEANCE. *Engel cackled like the maniac that he was as he slammed Oliver to the ground face first and turned him around. He then ripped Oliver's shirt off and looked at it with disgust.* Engel: heheheheh, remember those times when you said that I have an embarassing body? DO YOU!? *Engel used his fingernails and clawed through his abdomen and Oliver groaned in pain. Engel then ripped the skin off of Oliver violently and made Oliver look as his abdomen become a cavity as his organs were ripped out one by one. Engel then got up and stomped on his guts, ruining them while they're still connected to him, making Oliver go into a state of shock and near-death. Oliver laid on the floor, waiting for the sweet relief of death to take him away from the pain that he's feeling, but of course, Engel wasn't done yet. Engel moved behind Oliver's head and sat down, keeping his feet on Oliver's shoulders and his hands underneath Oliver's head. Engel violently ripped off Oliver's head and his trachea, ultimately and violently ending his life right then and there. Engel picked up Oliver's head and held it from the roots of his hair, cackling as he continued his hateful monologue.* Engel: You. You are a worthless piece of shit. I hate you, and I'm glad you're gone. You caused the death of not just Claire, but my close friends and many others. I wish for you to Rot. In. Hell. Because in all these halls, I had to put up with your torment. I had to deal with your insults and your nuisances. Because of your stupid actions and your self-proclaimed "harmless pranks", you brought casualty to this building. You caused the deaths of my friends, and my... closest. And now, because of you, I am all alone. *Engel falls onto his back, his spine hitting the tiles in a painful manner, but he didn't give a single care. He looked at the decapitated head of Oliver in his left hand and let go of his hair, then looked at his bloodied hands. As he saw, he reflected on himself with an imaginary mirror, and saw an inhumane **_thing_** looking back at him. Engel took a deep breath out of the pang of guilt that he felt for killing someone.* Engel: ... oh God... I can't.. believe it.. I... killed someone... with my bare hands... oh, Goddamnit... this... is so... _wrong..._ and yet... it feels... so... _right._ *Engel slowly but surely got himself up and looked at Oliver's head, picking it up from the roots of his hair like a sack and staining Oliver's blonde hair with blood and continued his hateful monologue towards Oliver's head, making sure that even in his death, he will not rest.* Engel: ... for you deserve it. For you and your friends caused Claire's death, showing her viscera to the public as if it was some art piece. I wish that in the Hell, where you burn on the stake, I hope that the demons torturing you look or even resemble me or my features. *Engel took another deep breath and calmed down, knowing that talking to a dead head is pointless. He tossed it aside and watched it roll a bit further away from him before it halted in a way where it directly looked up.* Engel: ... whatever, you're nothing but un-disposed garbage to me. I will make sure that your viscera will be seen by the public eye and you will never, and I mean never ever get a proper burial. When you land in Hell, which I am certain that you would, they will have to sew you up just to tear you apart again, and again, and again. I'd wish you rot and suffer all alone, but unfortunately for me, your friends will have no choice but to join you on the Highway to Hell. **
A programmed world I know what you learned Your heroes are now part of me You can run but you can't hide anywhere There are so many souls to play with come closer to me A million hands just for you I WILL TAKE THE WORLD FROM YOU
Gosh its been hard to sit thought this, Engel didn’t have to go this far on them, especially not with zip and Edward. I wanted Retribution on Oliver but I didn’t want him to get him killed let alone his friends killed
Bro zip is a freaking girl you just stab her with a pencil in the eye she's a woman you don't need to kill oliver you just have to..... Nevermind you just need to avenge claire by making his life difficult until he feels miserable no one deserve to die 😊❤😢😅
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