Hey guys, thanks for the support. I appreciate it. I was nervous when I uploaded this video. This might be a bit selfish of me, but I was wondering if you guys could send this video to those who might be interested.
Yeah it a excellent video it is a animated comic something l always who much should l a pay you to make a part two to this l am sending this to everyone in my contact list
this is very interesting, the concept and design is pretty good. still... i think there could be some improvements: - character development. imo its important. character development helps people understand whats happening and can captivate the public that's whatching the story. - like i said, lacking development and explaining what i saw at the beginning was: * a level 900 character was walking in the forest and suddenly meteors dropped * - tell people what is your character, how he got his abilities and what are his mission/purposes
I think so long as you're able to take lessons from this project and improve as a writer, it's a good thing to take it to the end. Don't expect perfection. That's a pitfall I fall into. It's your first project like this, the fact that you tried in the first place in and of itself is a very good thing.
Surprisingly, I was not referencing JoJo. I have not watched Jojo, I have seen a few memes though. Originally I wanted the character to be a coward who ran away from the monster. However, I decided to change this and make him perform a strategic retreat as he has no information about the monster.
Nice job as a fellow aspiring story writer your story gives me inspiration to keep it up. Also on a tangent you should check out the digimon card game it looks pretty fun and could blow up.
1:00 I was told someone would be here. Where are they? *loud voice nearby* Hey guys, Zerodex here!! But in all seriousness. I love this video, and I’ve loved all your content. I hope you keep going with this, and I know your content will just get better.
the main character is far different from what I though I am drawing my own story but I take much time to draw and my art not that much but I hope that day come when I make manga about this story the beginning is not strong enough but curiosity of to know where is the story will go
This is pretty awesome! I’m just now seeing this and I’m hooked! I’ll be looking forward to future parts. I wish this was an anime, it looks like it has the same vibe as a Monster Hunter/Berserk/Digimon hybrid. And that is awesome!
This has tons of potential! But I think without voicesovers, or proper sound effects. This would work better as a weekly episodic webcomic on webtoons instead. Akin to the original nuzlocke challenge comics. Plus you can easily put out a side story comic to expand world building even more.
so far, it's good! the grammar needs work, an the sound effects have traces f looping, but other than that, it's great work for a newbie; pot calling the kettle black here mind you.
That was good. I'm currently writing a science fantasy book/novel. I've gotten to a point to where I need to use Word Anvil to keep track of the characters and the world ac nd I'm not even done writing yet. Not to mention I'm on my first revision and I'm finishing up a story arc that wasn't planned.
I haven't been in the right headspace to watch this yet, but it's added to the queue of videos, and I've prematurely liked it because I'm sure it'll be awesome. I've loved hearing about your story before, actually watching it is sure to be a treat when I'm able to.
My only complaint is lack of voices, however I think the art, story, and world are great enough that the one complaint I have is nothing. I have never been so intrigued by just the first few seconds of a video in my entire life. This was well worth the wait.
I think no voices adds lot to atmosphere and having good voice acting for these monster would be pretty tough considering professional actors for video games and anime suck.
@@zerodex3039 awesome! It's just that I've been watching your videos for a couple of years now, and I just got around to watching your story and I loved it, so I thought it would be a shame if you had stopped. So, awesome!
I see MonsterHunter in this , i love the desings for those stone monsters the look really cool , and the armor looks great, keep doing youre best and working hard
Flesh out the story a bit more and perhaps refine the drawings a bit more. Otherwise it's fairly interesting. I'd like to see what you can do with this in the future.
you know in the beginning I thought for sure the hunter was DNA digivolve of megidramon and Dukemon. After a whole talk about the skull thing i guess I'm wrong.
At first, I was thinking of adding the audio bubbles, but I feel like it covers the character's faces and that would ruin the scenes. However, my version does make it hard to follow who is talking, I tried to make it easier by giving them different colors. I might try to place their names next to the text.
