I’d say watch those tuba splits (choose an octave to play in) and the horn part in the beginning might be a bit too repetitive (it’ll get a bit boring). And those triplets and the repeated As before the woodwind breakdown might be weird to execute at that tempo. I love that remix you did with “Not Like Us,” just make sure you keep the harmonic structure of the song. The song sounds nice tho dawg. Keep writing. Arranger to arranger🫡