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Final Tips for the AQA Language Paper 1 2024 Exam 

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Final tips for the May 23rd AQA English Language exam. Download the paper for free at mrbruff.com/free
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@skibidinigga-uz7yh
@skibidinigga-uz7yh 3 месяца назад
Thank you so much sir, I went from a grade 3 to a grade 6 in my mocks for language thanks to your videos, and your Lord of the flies videos really helped.
@zuuzunaasir9061
@zuuzunaasir9061 3 месяца назад
I’m actually stuck in grade 3😩 any tips on how you get from 3 to 6. Thanks
@skibidinigga-uz7yh
@skibidinigga-uz7yh 3 месяца назад
​@@zuuzunaasir9061Nigga just watch mr everything english and mr bruff bruv, mr Everything English gives a whole setup for question 5 for both papers, and tells you how to do the other questions and shit yh
@benjones2666
@benjones2666 3 месяца назад
How
@melzabyanna
@melzabyanna 3 месяца назад
@@zuuzunaasir9061fr same
@harriotdyson3761
@harriotdyson3761 3 месяца назад
@@zuuzunaasir9061Personally what i do is a plan for the Question 5 -Paragraph 1 Sky/Weather (even if you do the picture you can still describe the sky on whatever you want) Paragraph 2-Landscape Paragraph 3- one sentence in which it shifts focus on whatever your main idea for story is Paragraph 4-Describe details inside the setting Paragraph 5-On a character or another detail (i would choose character)
@clover182Harry
@clover182Harry 3 месяца назад
Cheers man! Good luck everyone for tomorrow!!
@1Sky0_0
@1Sky0_0 3 месяца назад
thx man u too!
@georgeknowles3351
@georgeknowles3351 3 месяца назад
Thank you overall for what you have done. I had missed many English lessons at the start of the year and thanks to you, you got me a grade 8 in my mock (i was predicted a 3) Thank you for all your poem, An Inspector calls, Macbeth, A Christmas Carol, and language videos.
@Nessarosejohnson
@Nessarosejohnson 3 месяца назад
Uhhh … how did u comment 4 hrs ago when he posted 2 hours ago?
@ellis2394
@ellis2394 3 месяца назад
probably got early access
@Nessarosejohnson
@Nessarosejohnson 3 месяца назад
Ok ty 😁
@xzss7029
@xzss7029 3 месяца назад
@@Nessarosejohnsonmaybe it’s a bot comment to boost his channel idek
@Jenson308
@Jenson308 3 месяца назад
🧢
@Stinkystrangler882
@Stinkystrangler882 3 месяца назад
I love English…it’s so fun. 😑😑😑
@Charlie_phrog
@Charlie_phrog 3 месяца назад
real
@RufusTheEpic
@RufusTheEpic 3 месяца назад
i feel you man it fucking sucks, im barely scraping a 7 for lang whereas maths is an easy 9
@Stinkystrangler882
@Stinkystrangler882 3 месяца назад
@@RufusTheEpic actually so true, maths makes sense, it’s subjective, English is objective and way harder to grasp concepts and get good ideas about things, and you also need to put it on paper so hard for no reason
@imtiazbi1112
@imtiazbi1112 3 месяца назад
@@RufusTheEpici can’t even get a 4 :( in maths and i was 1 mark off!
@DatCat222
@DatCat222 3 месяца назад
​@@Stinkystrangler882 isn't English subjective and maths objective because maths only has one answer? (Unless you're doing those x= questions lol)
@clipcove1
@clipcove1 3 месяца назад
When we needed him the most: even more than Lit coz it's pretty much unpredictable unlike Lit. Thank you, sir.
@lalayys
@lalayys 3 месяца назад
Yeah
@riutkalo8204
@riutkalo8204 3 месяца назад
definition of last minute revision
@baldi3161
@baldi3161 3 месяца назад
Mr Bruff and Mr Everythjng English = 🐐🐐
@millebobbie
@millebobbie 3 месяца назад
I am at teacher
@viperzz8963
@viperzz8963 3 месяца назад
goaed
@clipcove1
@clipcove1 3 месяца назад
MEE's predictions 4 poetry were 😓 he didn't even look at the last few poems in the anthology
@salmannadeem2827
@salmannadeem2827 3 месяца назад
Mr everything English is a joke man for the love of god don’t listen to him.
@baldi3161
@baldi3161 3 месяца назад
@@salmannadeem2827 he helped me so much with English lit paper 1 and 2 and for lang paper 1 with his livestream. So I’ll keep listening to him.
@squidodian
@squidodian 3 месяца назад
Thank you so much Mr bruff you have helped me revise for my gcses and are so far getting me through unscathed
@joshgrimwood485
@joshgrimwood485 3 месяца назад
Who's here for a quick reminder before the exam
@clipcove1
@clipcove1 3 месяца назад
Description: Q5 using the provided picture PANORAMIC view of the scene, initial scene of you viewing it Focus on specific segment of the image One line pg that shows a dramatic feeling and makes a sudden "shock" effect e.g. "It seemed to spritually awaken me and make pure my blood." Another focus Another focus Panoramic view of the "after" effect of viewing the scene, a different perspective of the scene from before. Ordered PGs for descriptive writing structure (using the picture) our English teacher provided to us. Is this great enough?
@bloop284
@bloop284 3 месяца назад
I'm off to do my exam, wish me luck!
@loui1449
@loui1449 3 месяца назад
3 am revision time 😭
@illia_Kerr
@illia_Kerr 3 месяца назад
07;03 revision 😢
@solarlocker80
@solarlocker80 3 месяца назад
@@illia_Kerr 7:40📉
@_r0ryyy._
@_r0ryyy._ 3 месяца назад
8am revision🤠
@wanderingperson9357
@wanderingperson9357 3 месяца назад
​@@_r0ryyy._just like me fr 🔥🔥
@pixsled
@pixsled 3 месяца назад
we cooking with this one 🔥🔥
@finberaviation
@finberaviation 3 месяца назад
Not language related, but I just wanted to say thank you Mr Bruff. You are one of the reasons why my English literature gcse felt good. You also helped me go from a 4 in literature at the start of year 10 to a 6 in my most recent mock. I hope to comment with good news on results day
@user-wj7lx3lq7k
@user-wj7lx3lq7k 3 месяца назад
You don't need to pass literature it's useless, language is all you need to not resit, focus on language
@hbomb4934
@hbomb4934 3 месяца назад
Mr bruff. You are the greatest man alive, seriously. Thank you! 🙏
@bean4542
@bean4542 3 месяца назад
Good luck today everyone ❤️
@Dave_1232
@Dave_1232 3 месяца назад
I got the exam tomorrow GG boys
@Mr.NeverMiss06
@Mr.NeverMiss06 3 месяца назад
Wish I found you earlier to revise for English lit, oh well what’s done is done 🤷🏾‍♂️
@justadino5694
@justadino5694 3 месяца назад
I love listening to this man before my exams 😂
@Oliver-nk5sz
@Oliver-nk5sz 3 месяца назад
I wish everyone good luck
@zyphenass5891
@zyphenass5891 3 месяца назад
Keep up the great lessons 👍👍
@itsmebigbert
@itsmebigbert 3 месяца назад
HEY GUYS! If anyone's up for it, here's a practice Q5 I did for you guys to mark. Marking always helps you improve! :) The rickety frames of the old house looked as though they were about to fall. There was not a single plank of wood on that unimpressive roof without some type of damage. Tapping my wet boots on the dry concrete path, I made my way towards the shed. The lacklustre appearance of the shed contrasted with the sprawling fields in every direction. The lackadaisical lump of dirt, directly next to the house, lay carelessly as the gentle wind breathed through it. The rain had stopped for the last few days allowing the sparse sunshine to illuminate the prairie. Every flower, which was once gulping for breath under the merciless onslaughts of constant rain, had now blossomed. The mountains were as colossal as ever, like snow-capped guardians watching over the peaceful prairie. Every object in view seemed at harmony - except the house. The wooden structure, which showed signs of once being an ornate and well-decorated building, looked empty. It seemed as if the previous owners had taken away every item alongside the memories and moments shared inside it; leaving it barren. Frighteningly, the two large windows on each end coupled with the wide, steel door in the centre made the house seem like an indignant creature. A creature who had been abandoned and forgotten. The long forgotten house was covered in years and years of 'art' left by reckless teenagers but the steel door looked impeccable (as if it had just been installed). Carefully prising the door open, I stepped in. After taking some seconds to register my surroundings, I began walking to the centre of the room like a moth to the flame. The insipid features of the empty room contrasted heavily with the masterpiece lying directly in the centre. It was a piece of art like no other. Its ornate framing glinted in the few rays of light which shone upon it. The vibrancy of the paint, the detail of the shapes and the flawless composition left me absolutely dumbfounded. Carefully, I used the tips of my fingers to feel the frame which was engrained with floral patterns and encrusted with what seemed to be gold. It was gold. Possibly the purest gold I had ever seen. This gold was not just on the frame but every little detail on the luscious painting was made with gold. I took five steps backwards and stared at the painting in awe. It was an angel, bright with the light of its candour, surrounded by a blissful darkness. It truly was a masterpiece.
@nos_nos
@nos_nos 3 месяца назад
wow! this is really cool. For feedback i would suggest only doing one single sentence paragraph (preferably keep the one at the end for an effective ending) i say this so the effect of it isn't lost as you've used the technique twice. I also wouldn't really suggest using the word "lackadaisical" because i feel it sounds clunky in the description and ruins the flow. I also hear way too many people using the word and often incorrectly. I feel that even if it was used correctly here, if you use it in your response one might group it with others who use the word without knowing the meaning. But i'm not an english teacher those are just my thoughts. This was a very strong response overall :D
@itsmebigbert
@itsmebigbert 3 месяца назад
@@nos_nos Thanks a lot! Some great advice here. Thinking of becoming an examiner? 🤷‍♂️
@salmannadeem2827
@salmannadeem2827 3 месяца назад
Max 25 marks
@bussin5878
@bussin5878 3 месяца назад
@@salmannadeem2827why do you say that?
@itsmebigbert
@itsmebigbert 3 месяца назад
@@salmannadeem2827 Really? What made you say that?
@michaelcharlesworth3579
@michaelcharlesworth3579 3 месяца назад
At least we are going down together
@Bob-je7lg
@Bob-je7lg 3 месяца назад
Last min revision going strong
@Ayliezay15
@Ayliezay15 3 месяца назад
Doing mine in the car on the way 😅
@kinzaraja7855
@kinzaraja7855 3 месяца назад
I haven’t revised at all, am I cooked?
@ToyGambles
@ToyGambles 3 месяца назад
no revising isnt that crucial for lang paper 1
@LordBigOoof
@LordBigOoof 3 месяца назад
Big disagree ​@@ToyGambles
@H2Splashy
@H2Splashy 3 месяца назад
​@@ToyGamblesexactly
@kinzaraja7855
@kinzaraja7855 3 месяца назад
@@ToyGambles thanks Leonard maybe ur mother will actually love you
@kinzaraja7855
@kinzaraja7855 22 дня назад
@@ToyGamblesI GOT GRADE EIGHT FOR LANG AND LIT MY EGO IS UNBEARABLE
@MrSmith-no7tk
@MrSmith-no7tk 3 месяца назад
This vid is sick bro🤙
@pupgaming5072
@pupgaming5072 2 месяца назад
Hoping to ace this mock tomorrow, will definteley use longer videos for my actual exams
@SKITYSTUDIOS
@SKITYSTUDIOS 3 месяца назад
Cheers mate
@rickroll612
@rickroll612 3 месяца назад
20 mins before the exam I'm cooked
@jakeguy3595
@jakeguy3595 3 месяца назад
thankyou mr bruff i love you
@eesamahmood7928
@eesamahmood7928 3 месяца назад
these tips were so final
@skylark4074
@skylark4074 3 месяца назад
@mrbruff Sorry for the naive question (parent to a Y10 ) starting early . For question 1 : could you just write 1. Brightly was hungry 2. He likes cheese bead and cider 3. He has a cough 4. His hands are raw OR do these things need to be expanded upon ? And not use the words in the text ie: his hands were red and sore ?!?!
@mrbruff
@mrbruff 3 месяца назад
I explain this here: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-hMhQIX9DCcQ.htmlsi=hP4JHVcMVlMi8uF8
@apostrix5276
@apostrix5276 3 месяца назад
IM COOKED
@_joe_kent
@_joe_kent 3 месяца назад
Thank you Andrew
@noname-ds1ng
@noname-ds1ng 3 месяца назад
i went from a 7 to a 9 in my mocks then you praying for similar in real things !!1!
@trees.grow.on.pineapples8969
@trees.grow.on.pineapples8969 3 месяца назад
needed edit: that exam was so yummy
@meeewazowski
@meeewazowski 3 месяца назад
I love this man
@68kezz
@68kezz 3 месяца назад
I’m cooked
@JerryP7a
@JerryP7a 3 месяца назад
many thanks
@finleywressell9520
@finleywressell9520 3 месяца назад
guys im cooked
@Johnnys_Manager
@Johnnys_Manager 3 месяца назад
do your best and read through notes on your way to school you’ll be fine
@satrnzzz
@satrnzzz 3 месяца назад
Real
@Charlie_phrog
@Charlie_phrog 3 месяца назад
last minute revision 💪💪💪
@jackvellenoweth4601
@jackvellenoweth4601 2 месяца назад
Night before mocks gang
@Shimeez
@Shimeez 3 месяца назад
Thanks Sir, may I ask what do you think will happen that I wrote about Mr Birling instead of Mrs Birling in Literature Paper 2? Many have said I'll be capped marks but others have said I'll only lose a couple marks, thank you very much Sir
@SamiraPlaysRoblox
@SamiraPlaysRoblox 3 месяца назад
Aqa may be nice and still mark it as if u link it with social class
@marleywolfdog
@marleywolfdog 3 месяца назад
how did so many people misread, no offence
@SamiraPlaysRoblox
@SamiraPlaysRoblox 3 месяца назад
@marleywolfdog nah cause fr I did Mrs Birling btw but these boundaries gonna be low but i think aqa will still mark some things if they wrote Mr Birling abt social class bec it is abt social class mainly they'd look for
@Shimeez
@Shimeez 3 месяца назад
@@marleywolfdog Printing error
@theultimatebananaboi163
@theultimatebananaboi163 3 месяца назад
youll be capped at 10-15
@evemc5944
@evemc5944 3 месяца назад
is it a good idea to write in a diary style? for the creative story?
@halaelabd8415
@halaelabd8415 3 месяца назад
yes as long as you still include all the good language techniques
@marleywolfdog
@marleywolfdog 3 месяца назад
I probably wouldn't, it doesn't give much opportunity for creative story writing and use of good techniques. 1st person present or past tense is your best shot. You could always give it a go, but personally I dont think its a good idea.
@twicepilled
@twicepilled 3 месяца назад
IT WAS GOODDD i there was fire on my pen when i was writing the q4
@ayomideprecious5911
@ayomideprecious5911 3 месяца назад
Hi guys, can someone please tell me the best to write in stories or descriptive writing I would appreciate an answer before tomorrow
@Marie-z
@Marie-z 3 месяца назад
I think the best thing is to write a description of a short moment in time as opposed to an entire stories using the DESIRE approach Each Letter being a paragraph D-> Detailed Description of setting E-> Emotions of character S-> Single Sentence for effect I-> Image - create an image of something R-> Rhetorical question or writer's reaction to said image E-> Echo the opening, link the end to the beginning so you can have cyclical structure God Bless🙏🏾
@BigSmoke-xh5hi
@BigSmoke-xh5hi 3 месяца назад
@@Marie-z W mans
@Rkenny18
@Rkenny18 3 месяца назад
For the poetry question In lit paper 2 aqa I used quotes from charge of the light brayed but said I was comparing kamikaze to bayonet charge
@zuqs4050
@zuqs4050 3 месяца назад
oops
@BEELZEBONG
@BEELZEBONG 3 месяца назад
😭
@user-hh2ep7hw2r
@user-hh2ep7hw2r 3 месяца назад
How did everyone find it?
@BigSmoke-xh5hi
@BigSmoke-xh5hi 3 месяца назад
lovely
@CharlesCoates-hz4ih
@CharlesCoates-hz4ih 3 месяца назад
If I just write a story based off a show will that get me marks or not
@ProsupremeVids
@ProsupremeVids 3 месяца назад
you will but the marks would be quite low
@CharlesCoates-hz4ih
@CharlesCoates-hz4ih 3 месяца назад
@@ProsupremeVidshow? If i make it detailed enough surely i can pass
@bussin5878
@bussin5878 3 месяца назад
100% just upscale the vocab you use, upgrade the plot and include all the language structures and SPAG and your set for like 30-40 marks if you pull it off
@Incognitoslag
@Incognitoslag 3 месяца назад
I’ll write about you for my creative story
@megamason8335
@megamason8335 3 месяца назад
Mr bruff, my story had a disagreement in it but wasn't really about it. Am i likely to get marked down?
@H2Splashy
@H2Splashy 3 месяца назад
then why didnt you do the description
@megamason8335
@megamason8335 3 месяца назад
@@H2Splashy it's harder
@RemDmingo
@RemDmingo 3 месяца назад
@@megamason8335you won’t get marked down don’t worry
@vasilijecakar6730
@vasilijecakar6730 3 месяца назад
Who trynna go to the club after
@stepbro777
@stepbro777 3 месяца назад
Mr Adam Camp is a gangster
@deergodrules
@deergodrules 3 месяца назад
im gonna fight god
@Chu2chompsankles
@Chu2chompsankles 3 месяца назад
Sleep 💀
@sunnyfiles
@sunnyfiles 3 месяца назад
I love you
@Junowazmad
@Junowazmad 3 месяца назад
Gang i may be cooked
@dylano5595
@dylano5595 3 месяца назад
Im w u
@dzisy_
@dzisy_ 3 месяца назад
thank you very much, good sir. 🫶
@limbonesbones1262
@limbonesbones1262 3 месяца назад
AI images 🫤🫤 disappointing
@mrbruff
@mrbruff 3 месяца назад
To avoid copyright infringement- I cannot show the actual exam reports.
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