*An honest review* Introduction couldn't be better, the tag's even great. Very easy to dabble into a large range of lyrics, simply due to how sophisticated it sounds. Simplistic at it's finest; Perfect use of drums, the light baseline and best of all, the absolutely gorgeous chimes used in the buildup. The main primary sample couldn't have had a better sound ratio, I find this sounding absolutely genuine. Most instrumentals have a bad issue with repetition, but I found myself listening to this a lot. You worked hard and it shows. I give this a 90/100; Nothing more fine than someone with a sweet taste in music. I wouldn't change anything. _Reply if you'd like me to review another instrumental_
Wow, thank you for taking the time to do this. I really appreciate any feedback on my work, especially when it’s this well thought out. Also makes me happy that your favorite part was the chimes because I spent the most time fine tuning that sound and getting it to sit in the mix the way I wanted
@@afibeats No problem, you did great! I like to be as critical as I can- I've written some really bad reviews before, but your instrumental made me smile and nod my head. You did very good, thanks for replying A-Fi! You made my day.
*Hello everybody! This is a disstrack, and the story of my life, so sit back and enjoy the show!* [0:19] (verse 1) Hello Gabe, I'm back, grab your bag, and start to pack it's gonna be a long journey, I'll never forget about the way you lie, remember when you almost made fun of me just because I cried? What did you expect? My f*ucking grandma died, remember all those threats? How you said you would kill me, and how you said you were the best? Remember when you made fun of my parents? Your lucky I didn't kill your ass, how you said you would hurt me, with those rash acts? How you always said I was the dumbest in the class? How you said if I was driving a car at the slowest speed possible I would crash? Haha, remember how you framed me saying I was trying to kill my dog? I used to call you, but not anymore dawg, you crossed the line, this ain't even it there's still some more lines, remember when we were playing cops n robbers, and you held me on the ground with your knee on my neck, I tried to scream I couldn't breathe, DAMN you really WERE tryna kill me, I had to struggle, but you were playing as the victim, that traumatized me, but that ain't all, remember when you tryed to scare me by holding that knife up to my neck, saying "haha don't hold back give into death" remember how you tried to drown me in the pool, make me struggle for air, making me look like a fool? Man you really are trying to make yourself look cool, you wanna have more attention and make me be "under your rule" *yes this actually happened, more coming soon*
not sure if anyone cares but if you guys are stoned like me atm you can watch pretty much all of the new movies and series on InstaFlixxer. Been streaming with my brother lately :)
I'll let my rhyme scheme define me kindly don't take me lightly because I see no body like me behind m I c where I be icy cold with lyrics coming out of my mouth I mean throat I'd be dope if I had some support I'd g o Harder than I do and I'd be known by more people than I am already I think I'm all ready but don't wanna be a mockery But I will stop any body demotivating me So I got this song ready and here I am on spitting Lyrics bending more than physics rules in outer space Isn't it cool that I make my own songs and mix it too I think that my head is too big for this buildings roof In this city you will never find anyone I'm a living proof But you can be just like me you have it within you You can be whatever you wanna you willing to (Never give up) be strong nothing you can't beyond I'm not the best right now but give my best in each song x4 The legend of angry blond lives on through me And I can be all what I wanna be We get one chance no respawn and I wanna see People sleep on my track one day they're gonna be Regretting every word they said that is rap is Not meant for me but karma Is a bad bitch And it strikes twice hard as Mike tyson Deadlier than attack of a wild bison But at rapping I've got criticism that quite blunt But I keep it on par with lyricism rhyme and Flow on the beat you know I won't cease Learning from the OGs spitting on dope beats When I say dope see I dont mean smoke jeez Only reason I'm still going is to show these Doubters the lyricism of my flow because If you think that'll give up then you don't know me Never give up) be strong nothing you can't beyond I'm not the best right now but give my best in each song x4 I keep on writing more, never give fuck like before Didn't give up fighting all challenges like mighty thor And I record my complex rhyming so I behold Skills know this if you diss me your thorat is My focus and I dont miss showing no emotions I dont give a fuck so competition is cut throat You must know my tough flow cannot be judged so I had nothing but hope it got struck by truck so I'll focus on my goal not even a little sway I keep on better than I was every single day I just want you to give me a chance want you to listen you May not like my music but I'll still never give up too I listened to criticism now it's in the blue To those critics is whom this song is written to They give me a chance prove myself Because that is what villains do
Eminem: Well if there's a slim shady in you bitch, then there's a slim shady Eminem: Who's fucking with the den, he's from Queens He's talking to this place, and he's a fuckin madman And he's making this song too... He's a lion's man, he's a lion's how we run around Ain't gotta be stumped, you gotta move baby There goes one of the realest motherfucker that you ever heard There goes out to the other one, it's a lion's how we run around And a crazy motherfucker that looks just like me And as for me, I don't know if we already had (He's) come from a fucking M-I-M A monster truck with a weak fist, if you say he's a monster Then fuck you, he's a wolf, he's a muthafucking muthafuckin' monster And I ain't no fool, I know what the fuck The World's about\
Nothin really fazed me, my life was amazing, until I went crazy, I kick my legs back, All lazy, I roll 5 blunts then I blaze it I don't drink or eat n my eyes are all hazy, opaque, I tried to to drown myself but I found no lake, I snuck snuff in my birthday cake that no-one ate When I was only eight I feel like a prisoner, I guess it's just fate That I relate to an inmate, Now it's time to clean the slate I already won this race your too late. Now just wait, Cus your about to Get a first taste of my toxic waste I wrote this shit with great haste Even so all my words got great taste.
I'm murdering this shit bro good look! I peeped around the corner I tried to warn ya You sweating like a sauna a fish out of water, A pack of phirana seen jaws around the corner, He flashed his teeth, got the point so I grabbed a knife haha,what's up homeslice howya been lets roll a rollercoaster ride threw hell dog let's go! Grab ya coat it's cold up in michigan winter again bitch ya know we up here shiverin ...what about the critics? The critics I took and diminished and finished within minutes I didnt do bitch I didnts last thing I let em do is fuck wit my image
@@Ybby999 yea dude. Bears are cool! They make great guard dogs and emotional support animals! Someone breaks into your house, just imagine a bear ready to defend your things
Hey! I was going to the page, and choosing 3 beats (one for free, the other two costs 30), but when I am about to pay, it says, that I’ll only get 2, how come? Can you help me?
Asylum, Darkness and Fire back, is the 3 I want ;) If I’m gonna make a rap to all 3, and post it on youtube, (you will ofc. Get into my discription), is it mp3 or a wave file? I was choosing mp3 (but now I am confused)
Omg this just in in time for the next show to begin judging so over rated if I'm not mistaken you the forsaken try again and then again tomorrow try again and you can go back to your since haters always haten
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