Not bad but the Deftones tag is way off... honestly saying Slipknot would fit better, or even more accurate -- Limp Bizkit (because they actually have music like this. Example: Bring It Back or Dad Vibes)
It's just death inside my hat, feeding on the tone The crowd taking possession of every cell shown GROWN! Cowardly taking over the lost TRIBE Smuggle hushed light from the ghastly night We be alright! Shine! The fireflies drew the line. Good song bro!