The whole track makes you feel like you are eating dry cake. Yeah, it's a cake, it's sweet, but it lacks texture. I'm not producer or some kind of expert, I'm just saying what I feel as a listener. Until 1:30 the progression is snail slow, you could start adding details after 5 or 12 seconds. You used distorted bass twice through whole track but, alone, it didn't make the track almost any agressive. Maybe some bass pattern could help? Or anything else, you are music maker here. 2:16 - 3:00 is good, no complaints. After 3:12 track doesn't bring anything drastically new but can't end itself, ending should NOT be almost 2 minutes long, holy. Don't take this as a trash talk, I'm just giving feedback, people who say "Awesome man" or "goes hard" are holding you back to be honest. I wish you luck on your journey!
You are right on many points. I have never made tracks of this type , it was a kind of experiment. I upload a lot of tracks, I'm still learning and discovering my sound. I believe that this track is not so bad. I can't please everyone, but I'm glad that someone likes it anyway. Thanks for the tips, I'll definitely take them to heart and hope you'll give me a chance! - G
